No Laces

A line of loafers march in step,
through halls of granite and of pearl.
A rare and vaunted holy sept,
heels all clicking, toes unfurled.

Through halls of granite and of pearl,
briefcases locked by secret code,
heels all clicking, toes unfurled,
two by two, sixteen all told.

Briefcases locked by secret code,
the minting men on orders high.
Two by two, sixteen all told,
Thirty-two pennies, no laces to tie.

The minting men on orders high,
a rare and vaunted holy sept.
Thirty-two pennies, no laces to tie,
a line of loafers march in step.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macmillan Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Hello, Aron. I so wanted to get here earlier. Your poem dazzled us. Strong, fluid language, lines that grip, you have it all here. If you are interested, I have blogged about the winners and your poem is posted there with a short commentary. Thank you for your stunning entry. Awesome. smiles from Cyndi
Jacob Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Thanks, Cyndi! Your feedback is greatly appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed my writing. The contest topic was fun to contemplate and I look forward to your next one.
Patrikar Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 9:25 AM
congratulations :)
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:19 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Aron. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 3:17 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Poet Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 11:17 AM
Very good Pantoum here Aron!Congrats on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Wow, this is just awesome. congrats on your big win. BG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 1:02 AM
Congratulations on another win Aron, well done and a well deserved win xx
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