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Just one word Is that it? In four months just one word .. OK NO it’s NOT OK It will NEVER be OK Our lives will never be the same YOU trampled over me Only care about yourself How can you live with your actions? Got to say I’m better off without you Screw you! 12th October 2015

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Skat A

Date: 12/17/2015 2:25:00 PM

JAN, NICE WIN..... SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 12/17/2015 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/15/2015 10:27:00 PM

This write was OK. Congratulations on your write Jan to the point!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/17/2015 1:15:00 AM

LOL Thanks Michael I will settle for OK lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/15/2015 9:58:00 PM

Jan ;) Congratulations on your HM. Stop by my latest blog "You're Still Out There" if you'd like. Enjoy the Holidays and Thank you for supporting my contest. Love LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 12/17/2015 1:16:00 AM

HM? I got 11th place lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/22/2015 8:31:00 AM

I LOVE TO DEEP EMOTIONS EXPRESSED MY FRIEND. A7

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 9:12:00 AM

Thanks Robert - best to get it out in poetic form lol:-) I've got past caring about this now:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2015 6:28:00 PM

I agree with Connie. it's cathartic. I really like this one, Jan. who is it for?? (oops, I think I know. hahaha)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/15/2015 6:33:00 PM

Ha ha ha it was cathartic to write and no I won't kiss and tell lol:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/15/2015 2:07:00 AM

Poetry can be very cathartic. I agree. Glad you can return to work. Blessings, Connie

Jan Allison
Date: 10/15/2015 4:03:00 AM

Oh it has been my lifeline since my hubby got cancer Connie - been on one heck of a journey since then:-( hugs jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/14/2015 6:07:00 PM

Ya! - what you said! Get 'em, Jan - very effective write ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/14/2015 6:09:00 PM

Thanks CayCay I wrote this on Sunday night was actually in a really happy mood when I posted it on Monday lol - good to get your feelings down on paper:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 10/13/2015 1:52:00 PM

Well that is indeed okay! I enjoyed

Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2015 1:55:00 PM

Good to get your emotions down on paper Judy - went back to work today it was SOOOOO good to be back in the swing of things:-) hugs Jan xxx

Mark Woods

Date: 10/12/2015 11:38:00 PM

Ouch an Angry Jan. Hopefully happy funny Jan comes back! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2015 2:57:00 AM

Happy funny Jan never went away lol - it is rare for me to get as angry as this and my emotions got released through my poem which I wrote on Sunday - I'm as happy as Larry as am hoping to go back to work today now my sciatica is on the mend - I'm just waiting for the OK from the doctor then I can got straight back this morning:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/12/2015 4:18:00 PM

Jan, recently in a catalog, I saw a small rag doll for sale called a "Dammit Doll" -- whereby you can slam it against something when you're angry! We poets are lucky to have our words do the job for us! Hope your poem helped get the hurt out! Hugs coming your way, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 4:21:00 PM

LOL Sandra - I actually don't like dolls - I never played with them as a child so a dammit doll wouldn't be for me - I rarely get this angry and it has now passed - amazing how poetry soothes my soul:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/12/2015 4:00:00 PM

rant and rant as this good for your soul... emotions are best dealt with when you allow them to surface.. feisty!.. well done!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 4:03:00 PM

Thanks Nette I wrote it last night - good to get my emotions down on paper and now I can move on:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/12/2015 2:46:00 PM

Jan, I do this also when I am hurt, upset, or angry, I throw all the emotion into a poem and it does help, be well my sweet poetic friend, you are loved by many, let that one go, and thanks for visiting my poem, creeping tendrils ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 2:48:00 PM

I feel much better for writing this and now I am well aware where I stand Broken Wings - I can move on and get on with my life:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/12/2015 2:28:00 PM

Wow Jan. You were fired up with this write. Hope you got it all out.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 2:30:00 PM

I got the hurt out in the poem Tim - I think it says everything I want to say - beleive me it takes a lot to get me this angry!:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/12/2015 2:02:00 PM

Hope this is from you imagination. A powerful write - about a failed friendship or relationship? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 2:13:00 PM

No sadly it's real Matthew ...and believe me it takes a lot to wind me up to THIS level - I wrote it last night :-( Hugs jan xx

Theresa Cw

Date: 10/12/2015 1:49:00 PM

WOW!! Jan with this short ranting of a poem, seems like someone stomped on your toes. Hope things get much better for you. Whoever goaded you into this frenzy is not worthy of your beautiful mind and soul. Take care sweet friend. Many hugs.... Theresa

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 1:55:00 PM

thanks Theresa so lovely to see you - and what an wonderful avatar :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2015 1:08:00 PM

- Deeply wounded..... The Golden Rule : ........ never hurt others, you do not like it yourself ! - big hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 1:27:00 PM

Thanks for those wise words Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/12/2015 11:11:00 AM

WOW, Jan... that's a big one in his/her face. Sorry, someone hurt you. You are right it is not okay. I don't know what happen here. But no one should be trampled on played with. You are the queen of your own heart. Sending soup mail. LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 11:19:00 AM

Takes a lot to rile me Linda - its a tough situation and i hoped by making contact we could resolve some issues but 'ok' was not quite the answer I was hoping for - sorry would have been a start:-( hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/12/2015 10:52:00 AM

How many times have we all, for a reason or another, have reached that point of indignation and wanted to scream on the top of our voices those words? Well, if you feel like that, certainly dear Jan, the person in question deserves it! God bless you!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 11:17:00 AM

It takes a lot to upset me Demetrios - I thought by making contact I would get some response - a mere 'ok' was not what I was after that is why I was so angry:-( Hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 10/12/2015 9:49:00 AM

Gee, Jan! I couldn't have told him off better myself. In fact I did the very thing!! ~ Lin ~

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2015 9:56:00 AM

It made me feel better writing this last night - this its actually for a her - I hope maybe one day she reads it and realises how much pain she has caused but sadly I think it is too late:-( hugs Jan xx