Nightmare

I saw you
In my dream 
As a monster,
Naked  with horns, 
I screamed loudly , 
" Christ Jesus " 
You turned  
To a  anormal person 
And foced 
Me to kiss you. 
              I was
              Petrifying
              After seeing  
              The monster. 

             Coming 
             morning, 
             I comprehended  that
             It was a Nightmare, 

But when I met 
You around the day , 
You frightened, 
          Trembled 
       as you knew
       What you were doing. 
You were so  flummoxed, 
And afraid to look at my face again. 
I understood  that 
You were  a trained witch 
Or a person used by 
Some locals witches. 
My feelings for you  disapeared, 
As you refused to be delivered, 
You were used to
drink human bloods, 
Than the blood
Of Christ Jesus , 
Which has  living life.

March 22/ 2023
Written for poetry contest sponsored by Constance la France
 Theme chosen  : Nightmare

....Third place winning 
in the competition...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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March 27, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Alfonso, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - 'N' Words. Your poem is creative and well done, so sorry about the delay in commenting, blessings
Thanks for collective Judgment and placement. Your encouraging comment on my blog means a lot. Your most welcome
Fowler Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Oh wow Alfonso. This is a nightmare to be forgotten! Yikes. Terrific penning. Sad, she preferred human blood to that of Christ. :)
All Witches in the World are like that. It is hard for them to accept Christ Jesus As their Lord and Saviour...And stop bewitching people. Thanks for visiting my page and comment...Linda. You are always welcome
Dutta Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 1:33 AM
Well penned Congrats to win.
Thank you You are welcome
Volumes Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 7:37 PM
Scary Poem, well written. Congratulations on your win in the competition.
Yeah... That is How dark world works. Thanks for the compliments and visiting this page. You are welcome
Seeker Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Fits the description of incubus or succubus ~ our fear is their power, our prayer, their demise. Congratulations on your win, Alfonso, enjoyed the write
Overview... Thank you so much for compliments. Hope you enjoyed the poem.
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