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Nightmare

I saw you In my dream As a monster, Naked  with horns, I screamed loudly , " Christ Jesus " You turned  To a  anormal person And foced Me to kiss you.               I was               Petrifying               After seeing                The monster.              Coming              morning,              I comprehended  that              It was a Nightmare, But when I met You around the day , You frightened,           Trembled        as you knew        What you were doing. You were so  flummoxed, And afraid to look at my face again. I understood  that You were  a trained witch Or a person used by Some locals witches. My feelings for you  disapeared, As you refused to be delivered, You were used to drink human bloods, Than the blood Of Christ Jesus , Which has  living life. March 22/ 2023 Written for poetry contest sponsored by Constance la France  Theme chosen  : Nightmare ....Third place winning in the competition...

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Date: 3/27/2023 8:42:00 AM
Alfonso, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - 'N' Words. Your poem is creative and well done, so sorry about the delay in commenting, blessings
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Thanks for collective Judgment and placement. Your encouraging comment on my blog means a lot. Your most welcome
Date: 3/24/2023 3:39:00 PM
Oh wow Alfonso. This is a nightmare to be forgotten! Yikes. Terrific penning. Sad, she preferred human blood to that of Christ. :)
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All Witches in the World are like that. It is hard for them to accept Christ Jesus As their Lord and Saviour...And stop bewitching people. Thanks for visiting my page and comment...Linda. You are always welcome
Date: 3/24/2023 1:33:00 AM
Well penned Congrats to win.
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Thank you You are welcome
Date: 3/23/2023 7:37:00 PM
Scary Poem, well written. Congratulations on your win in the competition.
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Yeah... That is How dark world works. Thanks for the compliments and visiting this page. You are welcome
Date: 3/23/2023 7:03:00 PM
Fits the description of incubus or succubus ~ our fear is their power, our prayer, their demise. Congratulations on your win, Alfonso, enjoyed the write
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Overview... Thank you so much for compliments. Hope you enjoyed the poem.

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