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Night Sky

How far are the stars from Jupiter's moons? My grand-daughter asks while holding my hand. As far as your dreams without feathered plumes, When you fly in the skies of wonderland. Our quiet gaze upon the Milky Way, As we stand on a small planet of blue. Mars and Venus are in cosmic display, As they appear bright near the moon in view. She asks of Pluto and how far away. Never to be seen in the blackest sky. Made of cold rock and not gases or clay. Her question simple, she wants to know why. To see the night sky with eyes of wonder. This shinning universe we stand under. 5/3/17 Contest The Night Sky Sonnets Only words..stars, Jupiter,Milky Way, planet, Mars, Venus, moon, Pluto, shinning

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Date: 5/3/2017 11:04:00 PM
You narrated a cute story... Loved the conversations between the grand father and grand daughter... Beautifully expressed... I enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing... A big 7...
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Date: 5/3/2017 5:42:00 PM
you did a fantastic job here! I sure hope this contest is around through the weekend. I really want to get to it!!
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Date: 5/3/2017 4:34:00 PM
A beautiful entry for the contest and an amazing look at the heavens through a child's eyes. How wonderful it must seem to her, because it still seems that way to me. Really nice my friend.
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Date: 5/3/2017 4:16:00 PM
Frederic, I am awestruck by your poetic skill! This is simply wonderful mate! All the best to you
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