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Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad

Behold the NIGHT of dread is upon us No one knows the route of this scary bus The thing that’s evident there is evil Some are dragged on some went without a fuss DARK are the insides scary forms around Each window closed to contain all the sound There will be screaming and rackling shackles Attempts at escape the ones that are bound BLACK shrouded figures walk from seat to seat Making sure hands are tied shackles on feet Told all to relax don’t make things harder They will be serving a sweetened blood treat The only ones HAPPY on this blood hunt Are the capturers that speaks with a grunt They laugh and tease making everyone sweat Wondering what happens over the mount The feeling of gloom makes the captured SAD To be captured and herded made them mad They hollered so loud police came on board And rescued them all o boy were they glad For Craig's contest: NIGHT DARK BLACK HAPPY SAD

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Date: 10/6/2012 8:48:00 AM
A great write but why am I not surprised! Good luck... love and warm wishes, Jack xox
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:18:00 PM
Tnx dear Jack. Appreciate it.
Date: 10/5/2012 10:14:00 PM
A great one for Halloween images, Joy. You could also enter this in the Halloween contest and I bet Russell would love it!!!
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:18:00 PM
Smile...I hear you. Appreciate your visit.
Date: 10/5/2012 6:34:00 PM
Good write. I thoroughly enjoyed participating in your recent contest.
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:17:00 PM
Tnx...your support is appreciated!
Date: 10/5/2012 11:52:00 AM
A very good entry for the contest, Joy..I'm just seeing this one. Well done. All the best! I held my breath as I read this..was happy at the end. Love, Annalise
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:16:00 PM
Tnx my sis..my friend. I hardly see you and miss your writes a lot!
Date: 10/5/2012 11:45:00 AM
Hi Joy, this is a wonderful poem. well done and thank you so much for my placement in your Weather Forcast Contest, I am very honoured. Love Constance
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:15:00 PM
Be blessed my friend...one love
Date: 10/5/2012 8:01:00 AM
impressive write Joy .. thankss so much for my big win in weather forecast fun .. have a blessed weekend .. we r baptizing our new grandbaby Sunday ..
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:14:00 PM
Any time Linda...all the best for your gran.
Date: 10/5/2012 7:21:00 AM
Enjoyed the play on the season of Halloween..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for chosing my weather poem for a stop in the winners' cirlce..I appreciate you reading it and finding it worthy to be there..Sara
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:14:00 PM
You are welcome Sara...tnx for your support!
Date: 9/27/2012 9:16:00 AM
MISS U JOY .. HOPE U R OK LUV ..
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:11:00 PM
Tnx hon...doing fine!
Date: 9/26/2012 10:09:00 PM
Joy; this is very good. I am glad that they were rescued. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:12:00 PM
Tnx Lucilla!
Date: 9/26/2012 2:53:00 PM
this is good Joy, a little different and enjoyed the read...
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:11:00 PM
Tnx Harry!
Date: 9/26/2012 9:29:00 AM
whoa! good one. good luck
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:10:00 PM
Tnx Apoor!
Date: 9/25/2012 7:21:00 AM
enjoyed reading today....well written
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:09:00 PM
Tnx Doris!
Date: 9/24/2012 3:34:00 PM
yickers!!! Glad you rescued the group!! Light & Love
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Joy Wellington
Date: 10/16/2012 10:08:00 PM
Lol...yep, the police to the rescue.
Date: 9/23/2012 9:30:00 AM
such an amazing content for an entry Joy .. so impressive .. stands out and speaks volumes of depth luv .. winning wishes to u .. thankxx for baby blessings luv ..
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/24/2012 1:16:00 AM
Tnx Linda...all the best!
Date: 9/22/2012 6:11:00 PM
A very original take on this contest. Best of luck.
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/24/2012 1:16:00 AM
Thanks Joann!
Date: 9/22/2012 1:32:00 AM
Well described, good luck.
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/24/2012 1:14:00 AM
Thanks a lot!
Date: 9/21/2012 3:32:00 AM
The best to you in the contest Joy. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/24/2012 1:14:00 AM
Tnx Sunshine...same for you!
Date: 9/20/2012 1:07:00 PM
What a fabulous and entertaining write my friend! I really enjoyed this incredibly dark poem with a happy ending! What a fantastic write that I've read this afternoon! Awesome piece, Great Work!!
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/24/2012 1:13:00 AM
tnx Rus...normally not my type of thing, but I started to write for the contest and it just spun out like that.

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