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Nicholas, My Clever Grandson

The joy of birth, the growing up,
leads us to adore our lovely babies.
But not, alas, without the toils of life.
Because we experience a lack of sleep,
contend with baby vomit,
or idiotically putting on his boxer shorts
completely the wrong way around.
 
Yet all is part of being loving
to a newborn child. Sometimes
I get the weird, unworldly feeling
that I'm the worst grandpa of all.
 
Perhaps it's just that I'm getting old.
Try lifting the chubby scamp a little while
and oh my poor back simply aches.
And if he cries I must find out
what ails the urchin, my dearest pet.
A dirty nappy?  Someone take care,
mother or granny, it's their job I'm afraid.
But if it's a bottle of milk he wants,
or nibbling a few small pieces of cereal,
then I am game.  Bring on the glorious food.
 
And when he sleeps, I'm just in heaven,
contemplating the profound miracle of life.
For though he's not directly mine,
he's the continuation of my genetic line.
And so I worry if he coughs or wheezes,
or falls whilst crawling, adding to his bruises.
Awake he's smiling, a gurgling bundle of joy
that makes me proud, he's Nicholas my boy.
 
NB  Nicholas, my grandson, is now 18 years old, studying dentistry at University (first in class) and has a driver's licence too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Sands Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:59 PM
This poem is special Victor. Congratulations to him as well...1st in class. Well done :)
Daniel Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 4:58 AM
Grandchildren are the pride of grandparents, great poem, Victor:)
Baker Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 10:38 PM
A fine poem of parenting nostalgia and proud grandfather. It's good to see our line going on isn't it, Victor. I have 5 grandsons and 2 granddaughters. 5 college graduates, 1 Freshman and the youngest started school this year. Children are wonderful blessings. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill
Volumes Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 12:55 AM
He is such a fine looking young man Victor. I am sure he adores his Grandfather and remembers fondly his time with you as a baby. Your poem is delightful and would relate to many a proud grandad that didn't change nappies. Your poem made me smile and I am sure Nicholas will treasure it, til the time he becomes a grandparent himself. Best wishes Wen
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 3:52 PM
Hello Victor, you have every right to be proud of your grandson. he will have a good career. Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene/
Elliott Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:15 AM
A handsome young man who is a wonderful grandson to you, and you a loving grandfather to him. Mazel Tov! First in his class which is a proud achievement for dental school. My very best wishes and prayers. Have a restful and inspirational weekend, Victor. ~
Callus Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 9:06 AM
I have a granddaughter the same age more or less as your grandson, Victor, and both are at university. Of course, I can relate to this poem of yours, though because of circumstances, I had continuous contact and hands-on experience with mine. ~ Regards // paul
George Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 1:49 AM
I can so well relate to what you have said about your grand child when he was still a baby. Changing the diaper never seems to be the work of men. Each time a baby dirties his diapers, either the mother or grandma have to come for the aid.... ! Glad your son is first in his class ! Congratulations to the proud grandpa !
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:27 PM
He is really good looking at first I wondered if you were showing a colorized version of your younger self. How many grandkids?
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 11:53 AM
Awesome that he is handsome and intelligent. Reading between the lines that he will soon be finding a beautiful bride as well. Thanks for sharing of yourself with us and I am sure you are a great grandpa. Sara K
Edmonds  Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 10:44 AM
A beautiful free verse tribute poem about the joys of having a precious grandson, as a child and now a very handsome young man, and doing so well too. Beryl
Anaya Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 3:04 PM
You are a blessed Grandfather & Nicholas is blessed to have you as a Grandfather. It's a charming tribute to baby and grown grandson, Victor. Your the best!
Hind Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 12:47 PM
Very cute, the poem and him. All the best to you both!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 11:46 AM
He is handsome, by the way!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 1:17 PM
He already has a girlfriend. I feel he is too young for love.
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 7:01 AM
A joy to watch them grow, is it not? Congratulations and best wishes to your dear grandson on his studies and future. hugs :)
Pandit Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:02 AM
Such a heartfelt poem, Victor. Fabulously dwelling in pride for the grandson--from the loving soul of a grandfather.
Greenhough Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 9:30 PM
I'm happy for you. The poem was a great description of your love for your grandson. Enjoy the week.
Williams Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 9:00 PM
Oh my, what a lovely tribute for your grandson. Time flies; it didn't seem that long you were telling me that Nicholas was only 15. From your beautiful poem, my dear Victor, I can tell that you genuinely are a great doting grandfather, and I'm sure the boys adore you. A fave for me...Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:55 AM
Hear my piano piece. You should like it.
Buehler Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 5:08 PM
Such a beautiful tribute, Victor. Thank you for sharing this thoroughly enjoyed tale of pride and joy. :)
Situation Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 4:53 PM
Lot's of love given in the making of this soon to be dentist. The proud feelings come with the sleepless nights. But also great grands also.
Poet Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 4:23 PM
Victor, watching your kid grow into a great guy must be quite rewarding. The joy of having a handsome, intelligent grandchild is amazing. Your poetry is an inheritance he will always treasure. Bless you and your grandson.
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 3:40 PM
wow what a handsome chap and so so clever, you must be so proud and rightly so Victor! hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Handsome grandson. Evening the bad things are blessings because they belong to you. Wonderful tribute to Nicholas. :) Hugs my friend
Kauffman Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Oh, the joy of a wonderful grandson, Victor. Handsome and smart, too! Your poem is, and will be, such a treasure for him! Blessings to the both of you!
Cunningham Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 12:35 PM
You must be so proud of him Victor, they soon grow up, he looks a fine young man. Tom
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