Get Your Premium Membership

Nevaquaya-W

Nevaquaya, tall, fair and dewey-eyed, was he A brave warrior but with an artist like heart, The whole village listened when he played his flute That he made from the hollow reeds. The warriors gathered around, women came to hear him His music moved their souls to passion. Then their hearts were melted to pity. Even the nature borrowed sweetness from his music. Once in his roaming he met Nokomis A beautiful maiden who fell in love at first sight Enamored of his melodious music. One day she was abducted by some natives A captive of their desire’s lust. But Nevaquaya did not lose the hope. When he saw the full moon reflected In the still water on shores of Gitche Gumee, He played on his flute with alluring tunes Of beauty, love and longing, of life undying With a faint hope Nokomis will hear his music. Even brooks ceased to murmur in the forest The wood-birds ceased singing And the rabbit sat upright to listen to his music Nourishing a faint hope, Nokomis will hear his music. Dr. Ram mehta =================================== First Place win in: Contest: Tell His Story sponsored by Constance La France-A Rambling poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 8/4/2011 8:40:00 PM
on the shores of gitche Gumee! how cool is this congrad's on your verses moving forward! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 8/3/2011 7:24:00 PM
Congratulations on making the first cut Doc and good luck:)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 9:55:00 AM
Dr Ram, Good Luck! Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 4:10:00 AM
Superb writing Dr. Ram . Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2011 2:31:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your featured poem this week on PS.. a most beautiful one to share with us all my friend with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 3/23/2011 11:39:00 AM
hey there Dr. Ram congratulations on your first place win in Constance's contest with this beauty ;)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/23/2011 7:11:00 AM
Congrats on a well written, well deserved First Place, Dr Ram. Beautiful story. Excellent. Kudos to you. Ralph
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win in Constance's "Tell His Story" Contest, Dr. Ram! Great work as usual! Love, Annalise
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 11:22:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top, Dr Ram. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your super 1st place win in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 8:53:00 AM
Big congratulations on taking first place with this awesome poem, Dr. Ram! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 8:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful story you have woven, Dr. Ram, and so in tune with the picture. Many congra't on your so well-deserved FIRST PLACE WIN. lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Dr Ram - congratulations on your Number One : ) Jack
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win for "Tell His Story" Dr. Ram! Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 7:49:00 AM
Such a wonderful story, tender and romantic! Congratulations on your first place win!! Well deserved! ~ Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations on the 1st place win Dr Ram.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 11:37:00 PM
my happy cheers to you for the special win,dr.ram :) huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 8:56:00 PM
An awesome story Dr. Ram and really deserved to be on the top. Heartiest congratulations for this win.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations Ram, on first place in my contest, I thought your poem was just wonderful. Could you please send me by soupmail, your address so I can forward, The Certificate of Achievement in Poetry, to you. which was the prize in this contest for First Place~~
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 8:14:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your first place win in Tell His Story contest.. a special write depicting the theme of the contest perfectly ... enjoy your top spot luv.. sorry..yes I have my new Sophia Loren glasses on at all times now.. just got confused about poet's name on entry luv..thankxxx..appreciate..
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 8:01:00 PM
Congraltulations Dr. Ram with your great win. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 8:42:00 AM
Enjoyed your great story, Dr. Ram! Best of luck in Constance's contest! And thank you for your kind comments...Have a great week!...Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 3/18/2011 5:16:00 PM
Amazing. I really enjoyed this one, Dr.Ram. Looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
Login to Reply
Date: 3/18/2011 4:54:00 PM
Most exciting read Dr. Ram and a glorious write and entry for Constance.. good luck my friend.. a wonderful tale encompassing the entire photo ..happy weekend luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 3/18/2011 4:32:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for the encouraging words left on my blog..I am really sore today..Sara
Login to Reply
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things