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Nebulous Horizon

When alabaster twilights rain upon celestial roses, with tear-soaked trinkets of ancient aromas ~ I wear their amaranth scents upon acrylic wrists, and tie my terracotta threads of twinkling trust with those topaz ribbons of reminiscent tales, slowly floating in an opal olive fog ~ where a bouquet of bones decorates my heart-shaped coffin and this hoaxed bride, veiled in oleander organza, unleashes a tryst of vows, quivering in vines ~ like an esoteric bane for those heinous hues of the elysian moonrise. Beneath this champagne chandelier, hanging with a million crimson crescents ~ dare not ensnare this raven-feathered maiden, who knows not the mellifluous masquerade of backstabbing mantras; her initials are condensed from the ink and blood ~ of those moon-winged butterflies, enslaved in raspberry chains, and she inhales shrieking ashes of ivory ~ pirouetting frivolously, like the last leaf of vengeance, in a blinding black hole of piercing petals, as her fingertips shiver and speak with scentless braille stars ~ stretching across those silver-smitten pillow skies, that once remembered her name... Here, I quench my quiescence of thirst, with pigmented poisons of thy paper paradise ~ slaying the unspoken, with those telepathic swords of carbon-glazed cloudbursts, where, words remain louder than the sharpest shrapnel of soul ~ and you reep the sins smoking in the surface of kohl incensed lakes... I'm the quaking time of Thor ~ his titanium armour, a grenade-gold inferno ~ ignited from the nemesis of handwritten au revoir, woven with onyx silhouettes of those, who once stitched scars in the tapestry of treason. But, can this macabre downpour ~ drench me in laments of liquid landslides, where destiny slithers in spine and secrets of scrutiny no longer remain as a satanic dagger in my spirit? perhaps, this poem is my shrine ~ and in the nebulous horizon, my chrysalis crown rests... echoing wicked whispers of eclipsed emeralds and obsidian oxymorons ~ so hear me in between, those translucent splashes of scarlet storms and skeletal silence, when I'm swallowed by the sun, as his lost stygian shadow... tasting the liquefied tremors of Bronté tunes ~ bleeding l i g h t e n i n g in vivacious thunderstorms, where harps hyphenate magnetic melancholy ~ and I m e l t in oil-painted runes of regrets...

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Date: 7/20/2025 6:52:00 AM
"Beneath this champagne chandelier, hanging with a million crimson crescents ~ dare not ensnare this raven-feathered maiden, who knows not the mellifluous masquerade of backstabbing mantras;" I wonder if you had some bitter experiences in your life, some backstabbing or some cruel betrayals. However those experiences have helped you become a poet much above the rank of poets of your age. To be frank, many a time, I fail to fathom into the depths of your poems and also the poetry of Empress. However, it makes me surprised how the images, metaphors and alliterations of you both resemble so closely. Peerless, you both stay so tall. Congratulations Hiya on your wonderful win. Proud to have shared the podium with you.
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Date: 7/19/2025 6:13:00 PM
Congrats, Hiya, on your top win! Great imagery!
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Date: 7/19/2025 4:05:00 PM
Hiya, heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it! I thought Ink Empress wrote this, then I saw a poem that looks just like this one, that's when I knew you wrote for my contest. This is a fave.
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Date: 7/14/2025 10:58:00 PM
Dear Hiya,gorgeous poem!your poem is a masterpiece of dark, whimsical beauty, weaving a complex tapestry of emotions, imagery, and symbolism. The language is rich and evocative, with phrases that dance on the page like 'chrysalis crown.' The themes of love, loss, and transformation are deeply woven throughout, creating a haunting and mesmerizing effect. Your unique voice shines through, drawing the reader into a world of vivid, often surreal, landscapes. A truly captivating piece! Love, Anne
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Date: 7/13/2025 12:36:00 PM
"piercing petals, as her fingertips shiver and speak with scentless braille stars ~" some really gorgeous writing, Hiya. Your work would stun someone who reads you for the first time. <3
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Date: 7/13/2025 8:08:00 AM
Creative and descriptive work using so many poetic techniques to tell your story of maybe love and loss. Sara K
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Date: 7/12/2025 1:18:00 PM
So many brilliant metaphors and other descriptions in your poem here. Very cool at the end how you divided up the word "melt" thanks for your visit to my poetry
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Date: 7/12/2025 6:31:00 AM
"the mellifluous masquerade of backstabbing mantras; her initials are condensed from the ink and blood" -- earned honesty. Really, no other kind. "woven with onyx silhouettes of those, who once stitched scars in the tapestry of treason." -- I know, seldom is treason earned -- "perhaps, this poem is my shrine" -- Yep, get it out, and let it go...high into the sky, and let the ravens and God deal it. True love never need apologize. Love is its own reason enough. Wonderful poetry!
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Date: 7/12/2025 5:13:00 AM
This glows in atmosphere flows the stratosphere with mouth gaping alliteration and concept. This raven feathered maiden has sealed her fate with vows of venomous vengeance where destiny slithers in spine and runes of regrets I resonate with the dramatic metaphors Quite an effect on me Hiya fave lines "so hear me in between, those translucent splashes of scarlet storms and skeletal silence, when I'm swallowed by the sun, as his lost stygian shadow... tasting the liquefied tremors of Bronté tunes" love the reference "as her fingertips shiver and speak" whoa Great entry! xhugs poetess ~ Anaya
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Date: 7/12/2025 2:06:00 AM
Wow youv said so much here using metaphors and symbolism and with brilliant alliteration! I absolutely love this! Yesterday i was listenin t the rain and my opening started in a similar way, you and i are always so connected and we write each others feelings! Youv expressed here in a way that hits the soul so hard! Those backstabbing mantras we all know and are aware of youv described them well and despite all that how you rise and flaunt your feathers is what impresses me always! I love the ending and your mention of mythology, and how youv painted imagery and wordplay that goes so well with the prompt youv written for! Absolutely stunning and so very impeccable! The way you writ dark and emotions has a special touch to it and i cant help but praise this as well as fave this! So good to read you after such a long time! Youv nailed it really! Best wishes for the contest my angelic star! Sending you light always!!
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Date: 7/12/2025 2:10:00 AM
I also feel like painting now after reading your last line! So good! You really are such a talented soulful poetess!

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