Naughty Girl, Me

There was a naughty girl
And a naughty girl was she
For nothing she would do
But sit all alone and worry
She hadn’t
Any money
She definitely
Wasn’t funny
She was
Just a mother
And a wife 
Like no other
Never very strong
Too often 
She’d be wrong
In her 
Darkest hour
She’d somehow 
Find the power
Sit back 
And find a smile
Just laugh 
For a little while
Responsibilities 
Each day
Cause her 
So much strife
She must find a way
To achieve 
Something 
In this life
Oh wait,
She already had
This naughty girl 
Was bad
She almost forgot
All the 
Special things 
She’s got
Two sons
Two daughters
A dog
A fish
And a mouse
All of them living 
With
Two tarantulas 
A snake
And her spouse
See 
There was a naughty girl
Turned out the best she could be
She grew up to be a woman
With a wonderful family


Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend


*For Brian’s “Christmas Parlour Poetry” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 9, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Lena i like the CHRISTMAS PARLOUR theme...pd
Bono Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 10:43 AM
new poem posted
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January 1, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Congratulations on your placement and for writing such a delightful write that shows exactly how much you have done and will do,,,Thank you for your time that you took to read and comment on my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
Bono Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 10:01 AM
I wanted to wish you a Happy New Year.I posted a song called Sissy's Song.If you get a chance,take a look for me.
Mckenzie Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Lena~ Congratulations on your placement in the contest this is a great write! Laura :)
Fraser Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 3:33 AM
Lena, many congratulations on your placing in Brian's contest, Merry Christmas from Bonnie Scotland >> James,xx
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December 23, 2009 at 8:23 PM
LOL! Congrats on your successin Brian's contest, Lena! Merry Christmas, Caroline.
Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 6:47 PM
Lena - Congratulations on your success in Brian’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj
Sweetheart Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Congrats Lolita on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. from one "naughty girl" to another I am happy we are sharing the spotlight as my entry came in 7th... its all good girl.... blessings... luv... my friend.. Linda-Marie..
Johnson Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 1:13 PM
And she found out that she wasnn't a bad girl at all. congratulations Lena. Love, Joyce
George   Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 11:02 AM
Beautiful bio! Lena. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
Haick Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Lena! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
Strand Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 2:02 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Lena.Rgds Brian .My latest contest 'A LITERARY LOVE AFFAIR is now open
Flasnick Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 5:20 AM
I love this!! Great write!
Bono Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 7:35 PM
Nicely done.I posted a new poem.
Neese Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 9:33 AM
Lolita, Thanks for your comments on my writing. I appreciate it. This poem of yours was absolutely stunning! Not at all what I expected, so I guess it was much like life itself, quite surprising! Thank you so much for sharing with us. Keep up the great work! Walker
Freeman Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Lolita this is so special a poem. From the words"Special things" on down is such a touching, heart warming giving of praise for the things in life that really are the reason we are living. For the quote, " the naughty girl turned out the best she could" Is really all that love requires of any of us. Smile, Love Moses
Strand Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Lena .Rgds Brian
Sweetheart Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 5:27 AM
Bravo Lolita.. this is simply adorable and a great BIO insight into your life.. nice family u have .. even the animals.. good luck in Brian's contest... my entry is Simply ME on ME and this was so fun to enter... one thing I forgot my two cats, Bronco and Gabriel.. hope they forgive me... thankxxx for your Soup Mail... U have a reply.. check... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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December 14, 2009 at 6:43 PM
Dear Lolita, An Early Congratulation on YOUR win in Brian's Contest Your not Naughty any more Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my works LOVE ALWAYS...HG SOUP MAIL CALL
Richards Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 3:41 PM
What a terrific job, Lena....I think you do have something very special with your wonderful family...with even tarantulas in the house....not everyone could be happy about that part! :) Nicely done! ~! Love, Carrie
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December 14, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Good luck in the contest with this lovely write. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
White Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Great!
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