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Natures Gifts

Of the dust of Earth, And softened spring rains; Flowers erupting, Colorful fireworks, Dancing on a breeze. They beautify All of nature With intriguing Vivid blossoms. See flora, Smell blossoms, Pick bouquet. Nature Gifts them All.

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Mansi Sharma

Date: 8/26/2017 5:03:00 PM

Beautiful!

Lin Lane

Date: 8/10/2017 7:45:00 AM

In addition to writing a lovely botanical poem, you've also introduced me to a new form. I think it's a fantastic one!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:08:00 PM

Oh, thank you. Good luck with writing one; can't hardly wait to red yours.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/10/2017 7:01:00 AM

Another beautiful tribute to nature!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:08:00 PM

Many thanks.

White Wolf

Date: 8/10/2017 1:24:00 AM

A lovely write! Just one question! What is a "pentaphor"? Did you mean metaphor?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/10/2017 1:43:00 AM

A Pentaphor is a form of poetry, similar to Diminished Hexaverse. Where Hexaverse has 6 stanzas, the Pentaphor has 5. 1st stanza has 5 lines, 5 syllables each; 2nd stanza 4 lines with 4 syllables, etc., until you reach the last stanza which has one syllable.