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My Wheel

MY WHEEL
The Mill wheel wouldn’t turn until the Spring, would wait for the bright days when birds would sing. In deep winter people saw the door closed, snow turned to ice on the wooden steps old. None saw footprints on them a long while now, not a glint of light behind iced window. The millman disappeared in misty air, his neighbor’s young wife wasn’t seen anywhere. Whispers ran through the town from door to door with words carried on mill wheel of rumor that this man had a clandestine affair with this lady, he ran away with her. When mist cleared, spring came floating in the air this man returned from cold with his sister. The sun shines, silence of winter he breaks. Ice melts, revealing secrets - the wheel creaks.
June 26, 2018 My lines are of 10 syllables each (Checked on howanysyllables.com)

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Date: 7/28/2018 7:57:00 AM
I really enjoyed this , Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/1/2018 1:11:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine.
Date: 7/25/2018 10:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery and story. Enjoyed!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/25/2018 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Date: 7/24/2018 1:32:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest, Subimal, and congrats! regards, Viv
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/24/2018 2:36:00 AM
Thank you, Viv for the placement.
Date: 7/16/2018 11:37:00 AM
You linked the lines well, Subimal. Glad for the happy ending; I'm not a fan of dark writes which don't resolve. Great piece!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 10:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/26/2018 5:38:00 AM
I love when winter has passed!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/27/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Lyric for your visit.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/27/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Lyric for your visit.

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