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‘I was born with the meaning of home running through my veins.’ Lauren Eden 

 

 

Across oceans and decades, my daughter and I set sail, Returning to the land where my roots still whispered my name. Sixty years apart, yet the pulse of home still flowed through my veins, A river winding back to its source, never truly lost. Words became bridges, stitching past and present with ease. My daughter, though a stranger to Hindi’s full embrace, Spoke in laughter, in gestures, in a language older than words— And in their eyes, she became the brightest star in our sky. Feasts unfolded like pages of an old, beloved book, Each dish a story, each sip of tea a memory reborn. Generations stood together—parents, children, and their own little ones, Echoes of my youth dancing through my high school halls, Where time had carved my name but left my spirit untouched. Tea time carried the fragrance of childhood once more— Mother’s voice weaving warmth through gossip and laughter, The sweet hush of togetherness, as precious as stolen time. How I wished to freeze those golden hours, But the clock’s steady hands pressed against our joy, And the road called us back to where life waited.

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Date: 4/5/2025 7:37:00 AM
Dear Jay, A belated Congratulations on this coming home penning. Although I'm not from India. However, your piece with it's sensory imagery rekindled my memories from three short trips to Chennai in earlier years. A wonderful home coming for you and your daughter..
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Date: 4/4/2025 9:15:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you, on this wonderful POTD.
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Date: 4/3/2025 3:44:00 PM
Oh Boy ! This one clung to my heart dear poet friend. POTD , way to go , !
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Date: 4/3/2025 11:52:00 AM
this is marvelous, Jay. A very well deserved POTD.
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Date: 4/2/2025 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Jay. Yours and my experiences are very similar - I went back too, and felt rejuvenated with love, care, more touching memories. You have penned a soulful poem with your enchanting quill. Best wishes ~
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Date: 4/2/2025 1:36:00 PM
Jay The nostalgia overflows from your heart. How wonderful to reconnect with your loved ones. Family ties are forever. Congratulations ON POTD
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Date: 4/2/2025 11:43:00 AM
' the pulse of home still flowed through my veins. ' It always will, my dear friend. Moments and memories of home, they will always be a part of you. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/2/2025 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations. Thanks for taking us on your journey to your homeland.
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Date: 4/2/2025 9:12:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away............
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Date: 4/2/2025 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 4/2/2025 4:36:00 AM
Hello Jay, a beautiful heartfelt journey that wonderfully captures the essence of returning to one's roots. I loved how the imagery of reconnecting with family, language, and memories across generations is so deeply moving. So tender and Congratulations on POTD!! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 4/2/2025 4:00:00 AM
Hello Jay, congratulations on your POTD win with your lovely piece on your trip back to India. There’s no greater feeling than going back to visit our birth place. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 4/2/2025 1:42:00 AM
Nostalgic ~ beautifully crafted, Jay, warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 4/2/2025 1:19:00 AM
- Back (to India) with a well deserved congrats on your p.o.t.d., Jay :) ... enjoy :) - hugs
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Date: 4/2/2025 12:43:00 AM
Jay, how nice for you and your daughter to visit the place where life started for you. A lovely poem for your daughter to treasure. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 4/2/2025 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations on a fantastic potd!
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Date: 4/2/2025 12:34:00 AM
Looks like you had an amazing time Jay, happy memories now. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 4/1/2025 8:57:00 PM
Hope you had a great time in India. On reading this, I felt goosebumps all over me. I am here in Kerala only. But your poem gave me memories of a get together at my ancestral home in a place not too far away after our parents' death, with our close family. Your poem has left me so nostalgic. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 4/1/2025 5:17:00 PM
You had an amazing time in India... the land of your ancestors' blessings and happy memories... Time certainly passed far too rapidly, I'm sure. what a delightful poem to peruse! Hi, Jay!
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Date: 4/1/2025 2:58:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Great trips with great remembers are the best kind to have. Time just flies by when one is having a good time. Hope you took a ton of pictures. Happy Spring Blessings To You As You Write Away...........
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Date: 4/1/2025 11:19:00 AM
Namaste' Jay your in the USA? I was thinking you were in India, how nice you and daughter are together, reaquainting after decades. There is nothing more precious!
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Date: 4/1/2025 11:03:00 AM
- You had a wonderful trip to India... where family roots brought so much joy and memories... I'm sure time flew by too quickly... so nice to read this poem, Jay :) - hugs
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