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My thoughts and reverie with pen and ink I let spill within a memoir journal. The saga and chronicle of my pain scratching, scribbling this journey on white sheets. With brooding musings, from a broken heart the sadness creeps like vines that curl, entwine. _______________________________ July 9, 2016 Poetry/Tetractys/My Thoughts Copyright Protected, ID 16- 807-433-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. End July Premiere Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand Ninth Place

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Date: 7/28/2017 9:39:00 PM
What a gorgeous and exquisitely-written piece ... very heart-rending ... love it! Congrats, BW! :-)
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Date: 7/28/2017 8:06:00 PM
Hi BW, a beautiful brooding poem. Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 1:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance! Janice
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:11:00 AM
this is very good writing in this unusual form. Congrats, Constance. a well deserved win.
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Date: 7/14/2016 2:54:00 PM
Lovely, Broken Wings! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2016 1:21:00 PM
Whoo - Hoo ! Congratulations on your Triple Tetractys contest,Constance , perfect form and wonderful poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2016 10:49:00 AM
Wow so thoughtful...Congrats for win
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Date: 7/12/2016 8:13:00 AM
BW, this is a beauty. I reckon it is always good to write and get the emotion out of your system. Wishing you the best for the contest *hugs*
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:17:00 PM
Writing is good for the soul, BW. Good luck for the contest. Barry
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Date: 7/9/2016 3:42:00 PM
Let it all out Broken Wings.. Great write :) All the best of luck
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