Get Your Premium Membership

My Shadow

Today I spied my shadow, And I asked it to dance. Once it would have taken the challenge. Once, when I was young. Where are the memories of yesteryear? Dissipated with the passage of time? Today I'm bent with arthritic pain, result of all my past heinous sins: a hunchback of misdemeanours. O how I recollect my wicked deeds! They echo in the dark corridors of a bent tired mind. Now I dance to the tune I composed throughout my life; But my shadow simply refuses to join in the frolic of my low strife. Ashamed I amble on life's highway.... towards my eventual demise. Then my shadow will find eternal its rest. fiction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/30/2022 11:49:00 AM
so what are these wicked deeds that caused arthritis? Well, this is a poem of yours i somehow missed. I really loved the imagery of no longer being really able to dance with your shadow!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2022 8:05:00 AM
A soulful write Victor. Well done! hugs :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2022 10:48:00 PM
What an amazing poem about ageing….clever, beautiful,heart touching and sad. Lovely Victor….Cuddles Debx
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2022 8:08:00 AM
A sad day for a silent companion, who trudges now, unaccepting of itself, and no longer gives out cheers when undeserving. A touching piece Victor!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/16/2022 12:05:00 AM
Superbly written fictional account, well constructed, as only you can Victor, in your inimitable style!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2022 7:16:00 PM
Sad and touching, Victor:)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/15/2022 4:26:00 AM
Such a poignat write Victor, Memories dance only with shadows of yesteryear, Well penned
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 5:56:00 PM
Glad this is fiction. I figure we all are bent from our mistakes that only God can straighten out. He is merciful.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 10:24:00 AM
The memories of past regrets often visit in later years. I love the way the shadow refused to dance. Sad, but lovely, Victor. Evelyn
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 9:11:00 AM
"But my shadow simply refuses to join in the frolic of my low strife. Ashamed I amble on life's highway...." Beautiful, honest poetry! No different from the rest of us you are. All things made new in Christ!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 7:37:00 AM
- Most have some dark corridors from the past... something we regret - Your shadow has forgotten how to dance... it needs some practice, Victor :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 6:24:00 AM
Victor, Your shadow analogy to youth was a nice touch to your poetry on growing older. Well done.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 5:45:00 AM
Emptions we ponder as we age. Brilliantly put: Now I dance to the tune I composed throughout my life; But my shadow simply refuses...
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 4:20:00 AM
Victor, I enjoyed your poem about aging, loved the shadow reference to being young, well done! hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 3:58:00 AM
I am glad it is fiction. Arthritis is caused by genetic abnormalities. The way we live doesn't help it though. Everyone in my family has it because they got a double dose of inheritance from both my husband's side and my side of the family. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my pages. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 2:17:00 AM
Very emotive! Age and a tormenting conscience can make us withered, drooping and defeated! Powerfully delineated, dear Victor !
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 2:06:00 AM
We all have a shadow that won’t dance to our tune, perhaps because of those secrets of heart overseen by the moon. Enjoyed the read… Belle
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2022 12:18:00 AM
Getting on in years is no fun as it brings a vast catalogue of ailments. Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 11/13/2022 11:51:00 PM
Such a sad verse, but so true. I love the imagery of age. Many blessings my friend
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs