My Shadow

Today I spied my shadow,
And I asked it to dance.
Once it would have taken the challenge.
Once, when I was young. 
Where are the memories of yesteryear?
Dissipated with the passage of time?
 
Today I'm bent with arthritic pain,
result of all my past heinous sins:
a hunchback of misdemeanours.
O how I recollect my wicked deeds!
They echo in the dark corridors
of a bent tired mind.
 
Now I dance to the tune
I composed throughout my life;
But my shadow simply refuses
to join in the frolic of my low strife.
Ashamed I amble on life's highway....
towards my eventual demise.
Then my shadow will find eternal its rest.


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Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 11:49 AM
so what are these wicked deeds that caused arthritis? Well, this is a poem of yours i somehow missed. I really loved the imagery of no longer being really able to dance with your shadow!
Fowler Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 8:05 AM
A soulful write Victor. Well done! hugs :)
M  Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 10:48 PM
What an amazing poem about ageing….clever, beautiful,heart touching and sad. Lovely Victor….Cuddles Debx
Anaya Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 8:08 AM
A sad day for a silent companion, who trudges now, unaccepting of itself, and no longer gives out cheers when undeserving. A touching piece Victor!
Seeker Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 12:05 AM
Superbly written fictional account, well constructed, as only you can Victor, in your inimitable style!
Daniel Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:16 PM
Sad and touching, Victor:)
May Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 4:26 AM
Such a poignat write Victor, Memories dance only with shadows of yesteryear, Well penned
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 5:56 PM
Glad this is fiction. I figure we all are bent from our mistakes that only God can straighten out. He is merciful.
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 10:24 AM
The memories of past regrets often visit in later years. I love the way the shadow refused to dance. Sad, but lovely, Victor. Evelyn
DiMino Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 9:11 AM
"But my shadow simply refuses to join in the frolic of my low strife. Ashamed I amble on life's highway...." Beautiful, honest poetry! No different from the rest of us you are. All things made new in Christ!
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 7:37 AM
- Most have some dark corridors from the past... something we regret - Your shadow has forgotten how to dance... it needs some practice, Victor :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:24 AM
Victor, Your shadow analogy to youth was a nice touch to your poetry on growing older. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 5:45 AM
Emptions we ponder as we age. Brilliantly put: Now I dance to the tune I composed throughout my life; But my shadow simply refuses...
Kitchin Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 4:20 AM
Victor, I enjoyed your poem about aging, loved the shadow reference to being young, well done! hugs
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 3:58 AM
I am glad it is fiction. Arthritis is caused by genetic abnormalities. The way we live doesn't help it though. Everyone in my family has it because they got a double dose of inheritance from both my husband's side and my side of the family. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my pages. Sara
George Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 2:17 AM
Very emotive! Age and a tormenting conscience can make us withered, drooping and defeated! Powerfully delineated, dear Victor !
Edmonds  Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 2:06 AM
We all have a shadow that won’t dance to our tune, perhaps because of those secrets of heart overseen by the moon. Enjoyed the read… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 12:18 AM
Getting on in years is no fun as it brings a vast catalogue of ailments. Tom
Roper Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:51 PM
Such a sad verse, but so true. I love the imagery of age. Many blessings my friend
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