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My Sadness

My young life, so far, has been a garden ravaged, scarred and weather-stained with deep sorrow and sadness; I hang my head like a dying flower damaged, this rose, bitter sweet and driven to vast madness. Scarred and weather-stained with deep sorrow and sadness, wild, rain storms and great winds shake the sea of my sleep; this rose, bitter sweet and driven to vast madness, lost in this sea of the melancholy- I keep. Wild, rain storms and great winds shake the sea of my sleep, always, curtains stir on my misery and pain; lost in this sea of the melancholy- I keep, my heart is drowned in the depths of falling rain. Always, curtains stir on my misery and pain, and yet I drink from the deep blue cup of life; my heart is drowned in the depths of falling rain, hope is music to the soul- though pierced by life's knife. And yet, I drink from the deep blue cup of life, I hang my head life a dying flower damaged; hope is music to the soul- though pierced by life's knife, my young life, so far, has been a garden ravaged. _______________________ April 28, 2017 Pantoum/My Sadness Copyright Protected, ID 896193

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Date: 4/30/2017 7:28:00 AM
Beautifully written BW.
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Date: 4/29/2017 8:35:00 AM
Broken Wings, I love how some lines keep coming back like a soulful refrain and keep refilling that bittersweet cup. It's beautifully done:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/29/2017 8:26:00 AM
This is such a poignant and a sad write, Constance. May you find true comfort in the Lord!!!
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Date: 4/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, the wings are badly broken in this deep emotional and brilliant write , most enjoyable read but deep down I do hope it is fiction :))) lots of hugs from Ireland
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