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My Red Birds

My red birds sitting in a tree, I hear them singing just to me. The two look so in love, a big nest they are building. Many little ones they will be having, each day a new baby is chirping. The babies need to learn to sing, to fly as mom pushes them out. Babies are now flying on their own, Spring is here for my red birds. Date Written: 3/9/2022 3 Place Form I - Imagism - New poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Note: I had Red Birds before I moved. None here. I miss them.

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Constance La France

Date: 3/19/2022 8:28:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest with your wonderful poem full of imagery ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2022 2:46:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your Imagism contest. Glad you enjoyed my write. "My Red Birds" was a fun write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.................

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/18/2022 11:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your contest win with this well-deserved writing, Paula. I hope you doing well my friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 11:45:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I did not know I had a win. It was a pleasure to hear from you and with your news. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/18/2022 9:19:00 AM

I always love this "Babies are now flying on their own,

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 11:41:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my bird write. It is always good to hear from you. Spring is almost here, hooray. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend........

Bill Baker

Date: 3/17/2022 2:30:00 PM

Great imagery and a chirping good time, Paula. I enjoyed the read. My apologies for the length of time since I last visited and read your poetry. A real shock once I see it. Thank you for doing much better at reading mine. Your friend, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 11:38:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this chirping good time write. No apologies needed. We are all busy. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend......................

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/14/2022 8:55:00 PM

Hello Paula ... spring offers us so much joy, colour, and new life, and to have it all in our own garden is happiness - thank you Paula - Lindsay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2022 12:12:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. I love spring and wish I had a big garden. Maybe some day. Have a great/blessed day...........................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/12/2022 7:25:00 AM

A beautiful, touching poem, Dear Paula. I can see you watch Nature lovingly and admire all it endows us with! Love and best wishes ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2022 2:23:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my red birds. It was fun to write. I wish they were still here. Have a great/blessed day...........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2022 1:03:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Paula - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/9/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Good to see you. I hope you are OK. Glad you like this red bird write. I sure do miss the little ones. Have a great/blessed day writing away with hugs...........