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My Place

I cannot recall my very first place
as a baby I did not know my home;
a new baby's room dressed with pretty lace
dad's dog was under the crib to watch~roam.
They say the walls were all painted yellow
the cute stuffed brown monkey laid beside me;
monkey and me were tucked in for a nap
in a room not pink like pretty jell-o.
My parents would pray for me on one knee,
then rocked me and brown monkey in their lap.
My place changed many times along the way,
as a baby~toddler~child~teen I grow.
Out the window I saw big clouds of gray,
I felt this gray~I did not like the move.
So very hard to have many a friend,
all this moving is not made for a kid.
All we do is packing and unpacking,
it really hurts a kid in the end.
I love the tall new slide ~ down I did slide,
what in the world was that crazy cracking.
My place~bedroom and friends were new again,
on the pretty curtains were gray kittens;
all this moving~packing was a huge drain,
the curtains had gray kittens no mittens.
This yard was really really big,
I found three girls in my new neighborhood.
Four of us would play for hours having fun,
we loved to put on costumes and wild wigs;
then climbing up in the pretty dogwood,
hungry late in the day home we would run.
Date Written: 4/30/2022
2 Place
 
c. place
HowManySyllables and Rhymezone
Form O- Ode- New poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 2/26/2023 1:54:00 PM
A lovely poem and an insight into your childhood. Dave
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 2:13:00 PM
Thank You, for your visit. Glad you enjoyed "My Place" write. It was fun to bring to life. Have a great/blessed day...............
Date: 6/10/2022 6:41:00 AM
Paula, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Ode contest, blessings ~Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/10/2022 8:10:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this wonderful win in your Ode contest. Glad you enjoyed this one. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend....................
Date: 6/3/2022 11:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend! What a wonderful childhood memory portrayed in your marvelous poem! So delighted to read it. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/5/2022 9:07:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my childhood memory write. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/2/2022 7:34:00 PM
The style of this one is SO engaging, down to earth and COOL. I love it. Congrats on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/3/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Glad you love this write. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/2/2022 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win , Paula, in Constance's Ode. Blessings my friend
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Many memories are here Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/2/2022 3:24:00 AM
Paula, congratulations on your win in the contest! A wonderful childhood memory! :)Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2022 9:06:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Many childhood memories from many different places/homes. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/1/2022 10:00:00 PM
Getting shifted from place to place is a botheration for everyone, especially for a kid . But you had the advantage of having umpteen memories. Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win, dear Paula !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Glad you like this. Yes, many memories. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/1/2022 8:28:00 PM
Beautiful painting of the scene. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/1/2022 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Paula. You deserve it with this stunningly well-written poem. Blessings
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2022 9:04:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/1/2022 10:08:00 AM
Paula congratulations on your win. So many childhood bedrooms with so many different memories. Wonderfully written. Blessings my friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/1/2022 10:54:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have this win. Glad you like this "My Place" write. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 5/10/2022 9:20:00 PM
I'm with you, Paula. All the moving and changing schools made being normal difficult and sometimes very lonely. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/12/2022 1:25:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 5/5/2022 10:41:00 AM
"all this moving is not made for a kid. All we do is packing and unpacking," I feel this one!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2022 9:01:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you feel this one. Moving is very hard on a child. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend.............
Date: 5/3/2022 3:31:00 AM
Paula, a lovely Ode that navigates growing-up..A pleasure to read...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you love this one. Moving is hard on adults and on a child. Have a great/ blessed day.............
Date: 5/1/2022 6:51:00 AM
Great poem Paula. All that moving, certainly is difficult for a child. Well done. I hope you have a great day :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you like it. Moving is hard on an adult but really hard on a child. Have a great/ blessed day.............

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