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My Muse Is Taking a Snooze

My dearest one, Where have you gone? In these long days I am bereft Without your deft Turn of phrase To spark My sluggish heart From my verbose malaise Are you upset, oh delicate flower of finest select Colors, who trickle In fickle Flame and fade A sleight-of-hand shade I mine fruitless lines All which you bade Too conveniently made Sharply undefined Is it me? Do I bore? Are my attentions a chore? I wish only this To create words of bliss But away you turn, as my implores Thud, a dud, between your coarse snores Maybe my flirty girl's Creative cold snap Just needs Milk and cookies And a cat-nap. 5/19/20 Entered in 'and now for something completely different' contest Judged 5/30/20

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Date: 6/17/2020 9:54:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this one Michelle, congrats on a top win!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/17/2020 10:58:00 PM
Thank you for the placement, John, much appreciated!
Date: 5/28/2020 6:57:00 AM
Trixie and I fell in love with this poem immediately, and I see her skipping away to make things tough for me today so thank you for inspiring my muse!
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Date: 5/21/2020 10:55:00 AM
A very different, wonderful write about your muse - they always disappear when we need them the most - however muse or not, this poem is a winner. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/20/2020 10:34:00 PM
G'day Michelle … odd isn't it how the love of being a writer goes. It can be either feast or famine but thankfully never ventures too far away - thank you Michelle - Lindsay
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Date: 5/20/2020 9:07:00 PM
Bravo, Michelle! Delightful, delicious, and delectable! ~ gw
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Date: 5/20/2020 6:43:00 PM
Love this Michelle. I think you woke up your muse. Great job and good luck in the contest. JB
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Date: 5/20/2020 1:44:00 PM
Perhaps your muse is like Donald Trump and throws a fit if you don't hang on every word? Nicely caught and presented. Good luck! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/20/2020 6:34:00 AM
This is simply adorable. I enjoyed it tremendously and hope it's a winner. God bless you dear friend... with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 5/19/2020 11:37:00 PM
Michelle, I have found there is nothing better to wake up a napping muse than to write about her! Your love of wordplay and fun sounding phrases and alliteration is nicely displayed in this poem. So imaginative and whimsical. I wish you all the best in the contest with this gem (and I hope your library opens up soon!) ~ John
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/22/2020 1:36:00 PM
You flatter me, John (and I hope it opens soon, too!)
Date: 5/19/2020 10:16:00 PM
Very creative and delightful, Michelle! Janice
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/19/2020 10:41:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Janice-

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