My Muse Is Taking a Snooze

My dearest one,
Where have you gone?
In these long days
I am bereft
Without your deft
Turn of phrase
To spark
My sluggish heart
From my verbose malaise

Are you upset, oh delicate
flower of finest select
Colors, who trickle
In fickle
Flame and fade
A sleight-of-hand shade
I mine fruitless lines
All which you bade
Too conveniently made
Sharply undefined

Is it me? Do I bore?
Are my attentions a chore?
I wish only this
To create words of bliss
But away you turn, as my implores
Thud, a dud, between your coarse snores

Maybe my flirty girl's
Creative cold snap
Just needs
Milk and cookies
And a cat-nap.

5/19/20

Entered in 'and now for something completely different' contest
Judged 5/30/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 9:54 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this one Michelle, congrats on a top win!
Faulkner Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Thank you for the placement, John, much appreciated!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Trixie and I fell in love with this poem immediately, and I see her skipping away to make things tough for me today so thank you for inspiring my muse!
Proxenos Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 10:55 AM
A very different, wonderful write about your muse - they always disappear when we need them the most - however muse or not, this poem is a winner. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 10:34 PM
G'day Michelle … odd isn't it how the love of being a writer goes. It can be either feast or famine but thankfully never ventures too far away - thank you Michelle - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Bravo, Michelle! Delightful, delicious, and delectable! ~ gw
Ball Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Love this Michelle. I think you woke up your muse. Great job and good luck in the contest. JB
Leffanta Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Perhaps your muse is like Donald Trump and throws a fit if you don't hang on every word? Nicely caught and presented. Good luck! Aloha! Rico
Mcintosh Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 6:34 AM
This is simply adorable. I enjoyed it tremendously and hope it's a winner. God bless you dear friend... with love and prayers, Gina
Watt Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 11:37 PM
Michelle, I have found there is nothing better to wake up a napping muse than to write about her! Your love of wordplay and fun sounding phrases and alliteration is nicely displayed in this poem. So imaginative and whimsical. I wish you all the best in the contest with this gem (and I hope your library opens up soon!) ~ John
Faulkner Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 1:36 PM
You flatter me, John (and I hope it opens soon, too!)
Canerdy Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 10:16 PM
Very creative and delightful, Michelle! Janice
Faulkner Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 10:41 PM
Thank you kindly, Janice-
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