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My Last Breath - I Love You

If I had to choose between loving you And breathing my very last breath I would use this opportunity To say I love you This is how deep my feelings are for you To the ends of the earth I would go To find you again if we ever were separated I'm a mere mortal trying to explain My love for you is on a higher plain One that's reserved for the ultimate lovers Those that have discovered The true meaning of this emotion The reward for making the journey through life With its many tragedies and pitfalls So now you see my love If I had to choose between loving you And breathing my very last breath I would use my last breath To say I love you

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Date: 4/23/2023 5:43:00 AM
Very beautiful, congratulations on poem of the day
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/24/2023 10:13:00 AM
Thank you sweetie for my POTD!!! XOX
Date: 4/6/2023 8:43:00 PM
Jack, wonderful writing and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/7/2023 5:06:00 AM
Thank you dear Constance!!! It's a Canadian thing eh! LOL Very much appreciated Love Happy Jack XOXOX
Date: 4/4/2023 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/5/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette! Your words are much appreciated! XOX
Date: 4/4/2023 6:47:00 PM
This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Jack, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/5/2023 4:01:00 AM
Your tender words caress me... my heart! Thank you dear Brandy! Love Jack!
Date: 4/4/2023 3:37:00 PM
True love ... a poem for true lovers. Congratulations on your POTD, Jack! Enjoy your well- deserved honor. A poetry friend in Texas, Bill
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Bill, much appreciated my friend! Cheers from Canada!
Date: 4/4/2023 1:24:00 PM
Such a beautifully written poem, Jack:-) Congratulations on your POTD win!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 2:09:00 PM
Many thanks Edward! Much appreciated!
Date: 4/4/2023 11:40:00 AM
Very beautifully expressed, Jack, and an excellent selection for POTD.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 2:07:00 PM
Very nice response to my POTD... thank you Jim! Cheers!
Date: 4/4/2023 9:28:00 AM
So sweet and romantic - a journey of love and devotion. Congratulations on POTD Jack! :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 10:06:00 AM
Linda, sweet words you send me! Mucho love! XOXOX
Date: 4/4/2023 9:26:00 AM
Only a true love will go to the end. Beautiful, Jack. And a big congrats on Potd. :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 10:04:00 AM
Love to the very end! True love ........
Date: 4/4/2023 9:19:00 AM
Last kiss... last breath... sudden death... Congrats on POTD, Jack!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 10:02:00 AM
To the very end!!!!!!! True love!
Date: 4/4/2023 8:43:00 AM
Just beautiful Jack. Sorry I was away to miss your big day. Congtatulations.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 10:01:00 AM
Still love you a big bunch my sweet lady!!!! OXOXOX OX... told you!
Date: 4/4/2023 7:12:00 AM
Wow Jack. This is an exceptional love poem. Congratulations on POTD my friend. Have a wonderful day:)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 8:10:00 AM
WOW! Love poems... see I can still write 'em! LOL Have a great day Dan!
Date: 4/4/2023 6:58:00 AM
Beautiful Jack, who wouldn’t love to receive a gem as lovely and romantic as this. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 8:04:00 AM
I am so happy to receive your sweet words dear Belle and POTD! Thank you! XOX
Date: 4/4/2023 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, great tell of love , depth of this is endless
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 6:50:00 AM
Stephan... much appreciated for your kind words "depth of love is endless"
Date: 4/4/2023 6:40:00 AM
- This is what true love is... congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jack :) - hugs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 6:47:00 AM
Much appreciated "Sunshine Smile" Hugs, Jack XOX
Date: 4/4/2023 6:31:00 AM
Beautiful , lovely POTD! Congratulations :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 8:13:00 AM
Many thanks dear Heidi for the POTD thingy! Cheers! XOX
Date: 4/4/2023 6:15:00 AM
Jack, Congrats Your POTD. Keep Rolling.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 6:42:00 AM
Thanks RJ for your kind works! XOX
Date: 4/4/2023 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a lovely write about love. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 6:40:00 AM
What sweet words you send me Paula! Thank you...
Date: 4/4/2023 5:00:00 AM
I cannot think of a better way to use our last breath, than telling someone we love them, very deep soulful writing, congratulations Jack on POTD, cheers David
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 5:11:00 AM
What a thank you my friend! You have made me proud David!
Date: 4/4/2023 3:50:00 AM
OK, Jack, I'm gonna steal this....and tell my wife I wrote it just for her.....would that everyone should experience such a love.....wonderfully written treatise on love.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 5:07:00 AM
Hey hey that's naughty but OK! Thank you Jahn!
Date: 4/4/2023 3:29:00 AM
Jack, a heartfelt poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 5:13:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for the congratulations on the POTD!
Date: 4/4/2023 1:43:00 AM
A clear fav, Jack! Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 5:00:00 AM
Sweet words of congratulations my friend!
Date: 4/4/2023 12:33:00 AM
Very romantic verse Jack, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 4:56:00 AM
This old guy still has is it eh! OOOUUUWWW! Have a good day my friend!
Date: 4/3/2023 8:53:00 PM
Jack, Such a nice gift in 'last breath'. One of life's simple pleasures, to love. Yet so hard a message to convey. One that's not lost on you. A fave. -Richard
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/4/2023 4:49:00 AM
Such simple words straight from the heart! Love...
Date: 4/3/2023 3:41:00 PM
...nice thoughts......be of peace-love.... a mind balanced....in/on/of your lifes (time-dream) journeying.......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/3/2023 5:10:00 PM
Love your words of encouragement my friend! Cheers!!!
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