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My Heart Holds My Pen

Soft flurries of affection find my eyes lost in the prism of the beauty that engulfs my world, for to inhale is to fall into the scent of sweet essence floating the breeze exhaling from your skin You slumber, silence caresses gently while phrases of euphoric devotion gather within of this angelic vision, a smile appears, perhaps dreams of us, morning glory vistas full abloom, as I reach for pad and pen Words pour on the page, my fingers dance in rhythmic patterns now wrapped warmly about my thoughts and I wonder quietly to myself, where is it they are born, how do they flow so easily From this mind that constantly spins in whirls of enchanted visions, heavenly views and frantic desires, where each vowel, noun, adjective or verb in feathered shapes of ink, somehow scribble silhouettes of my love for you It is now that I notice, while sitting in the frail sunshine of the dawn whispering from an awakening horizon that my hands are empty, my fingers barren for it seems as I write of my love for you, it is my heart that holds my pen

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Date: 11/20/2016 8:44:00 PM
wow, this is REALLY beautiful work,Chris. Have I visited your poetry before? I hope you will keep seeing mine for it will remind me to come visit your page. In fact, let me see just one more!! FAVE
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks so very much Andrea. Yes, you have been to my page before and I always appreciate it when you stop by.
Date: 11/19/2016 3:04:00 PM
ohh, i agree; poetry is your ambrosia, chris.. so well crafted... keep on penning; huggs!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so very much Nette for your nice comments on my poem.
Date: 11/19/2016 7:12:00 AM
The heart indeed holds the pen..and the muse blow the thoughts...So so beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so very much Charmaine, it sure does seem that way. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/18/2016 10:04:00 PM
Hi Chris, I enjoyed this write from start to finish. This piece is beautiful and sooo romantic. The last three lines were amazing and so poetic "That my hands are empty, my fingers barren for it seems as I write of my love for you, it is my heart that holds my pen" Well done. A without a doubt seven: -)Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend for always leaving such nice words for me.
Date: 11/18/2016 8:26:00 PM
Just wonderful Chris, loved every word (think missing an n an awakening)? A7 (within of this angelic vision?)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thanks so much John, I edited it. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 11/18/2016 7:26:00 PM
I'm running out of adjectives to articulate your poetic prowess, I should just say, I'm speechless midst heart palpitations, and leave it at that. :) 7+ fave
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend.
Date: 11/18/2016 6:09:00 PM
Ah ha! There it is! I knew I'd come across it sooner or later! True poetic beauty!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:09:00 AM
Where? :) Thanks so much Christy, I am thrilled you liked this one
Date: 11/18/2016 6:04:00 PM
You serve your first verses as an appetizer, the next ones as the entree' and that final one is a sweet dessert. I enjoyed the entire banquet, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so very much Lin, I am happy you enjoyed my poetic servings.
Date: 11/18/2016 6:02:00 PM
Your heart holding the pen did a beautiful writing here, Chris! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi for your kind thoughts.

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