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My Heart For You

"I lay open my heart for you..." - by Poet Love is blooming in my heart for you, I dedicate my pen's art for you; Watching you smile, my joy overflows, I've been hit by Cupid's dart for you; Together we can build our love home, Let me decorate life's chart for you; You're my mesmerising Juliet, Let me play Romeo's part for you; Without you, I feel hollow within, For I've set my heart apart for you; Your shy eyes meet mine and there I see Your love for me, a new start for you; My sweetheart, you are my little doe, And I'm Alexander Hart* for you. 02.27.2022 9 syllables per line * A fictional name used here, because the ghazal form requires it. (no offense meant to anyone, dead or living) {My ghazal is an outpouring of love, though not melancholic as normally required}
Theme: Love For Constance La France's "G - Give me a new poem - any form" contest

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Date: 3/14/2022 3:37:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/4/2022 1:01:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my Give Me A New Poem Contest with your beautiful poem and I love your quote too ~Constance
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Date: 3/2/2022 8:30:00 PM
beautiful. This form has such an interesting inner rhyming. Congrats
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Date: 3/2/2022 4:55:00 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win jo
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Date: 3/2/2022 12:00:00 AM
Congratulations, a lovely poem.
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Date: 3/1/2022 8:12:00 PM
I truly love this poem, as I read it I wanted more - well done, regards, Betty
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Date: 3/1/2022 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Jo. To me, Ghazal is a perfect poetic vehicle for the theme of love. Your poem is romantic and passionate. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/1/2022 6:00:00 PM
Jo, I'm not really sure how the form is written. I have tried only one poem and won.. But I feel I wasn't really equipped to do it, so I just wrote a Rhyme for the contest. What I read sounds like a very good entry with great flow.
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Date: 3/1/2022 5:14:00 PM
Nice entry, Jo. Tough form, well written. A poet friend, Bill
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Date: 3/1/2022 5:11:00 AM
The sweet bloom of love, Wondeeful write Jo
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Date: 2/28/2022 6:02:00 AM
Hi Jo, You've penned a well-written entry for the contest theme. I found it to be romantic as well. Good title and content. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
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