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My Dreamy Meander

This is my humble tribute to our dear Soup member Andrea Dietrich, using some of her poem titles. This is actually inspired by a contest named "Title Wave", that was sponsored by our Soup member Richard Lamoureux last year, in which I did not enter, but had always wanted to write one Title wave poem using other poets' titles. Thank you Richard Lamoureux for the inspiration and thank you dear Andrea for the wonderful titles in pages and pages of poems you had contributed to Soup. It was so much fun writing this. I wish that I/we find time to read more of the exquisite inspiring poems of Andrea, that she has contributed to Soup. (Below, the titles of Andrea's poems that I have used for this tribute poem for her are in quotes. I have not capitalized the words within the titles as they were) "It was one of those mornings" of "one sunny sweet sunflower day" from a nice refreshing sleep, I had just woken up, "when skies were bright" with "the brilliant light" - "dreaming into the day", I found myself "on avenues of aimless end" and into a brief reverie, I fell! In that moment, so oneiric, "as I drift" "along the shady paths of vivid green" over an enchanting garden - oh! "how beautiful" that idyllic spot "of butterflies and rose buds" where I saw "a kaleidoscope of butterflies". There, slowly I did alight to see " the fairest of all roses". Drifting again, in my chimera, through the fresh morning air, I travelled pretty far in that dreamy state until I revelled in "miles of smiles" greeting me: a moment "when hope shines out". Now, I could feel "a kiss of sunshine" on my face - Oh, "what bliss the summer brings!" As I continued to meander, I saw a young girl with an angelic face "feeding the ducklings" "in a distant field". In the middle of my dreamy drift, as I reached a lush valley of rolling hills, "through the mist" I could see now "the hills are alive" with green pastures and I feel I am "on top of the world". "Somewhere", far "away", from the thickets I do hear "the sweetest song" of birds: Aw, "the woodland's lullaby", "the waltz of the leaves", those delicate pink " "cherry blossoms", and the trees with "bountiful berries bring bliss" to my wearied soul forever - "tick tock tick tock".... the tick tock of the bedroom clock tickles my tireless thoughts of sweet dreamy rambles as now I gently wake up from my reverie... Date: 01/17/2022

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Date: 3/13/2022 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to an excellent poet, Ani. You created an eloquent poem. Bill
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Date: 1/23/2022 2:49:00 AM
You have done a wonderful job, Anitha, and Andrea definitely deserves being put in the limelight. She has been on Soup for many years (long before I joined in 2014) and her poems have been widely read and enjoyed by many. Keep on meandering :) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 1/22/2022 10:23:00 PM
Your magnificent poem honors Andrea with the inclusion of her many beautiful titles to create this fabulous poem Anitha. I remember Richard’s contest and it was so much fun creating a poem from titles. It takes time and talent for such a gift as this. I know Andrea will cherish this poem Anitha. I really loved it. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/21/2022 12:47:00 PM
WOW!!! "My Dreamy Meander" is a very creative write and tribute to Andrea. Your pen was writing overtime on this one. Have a great day/weekend..............
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Date: 1/19/2022 7:50:00 PM
Ani.... You have done a wonderful job. This is amazing and the lovely reverie you were in has become part of my reverie too ! I admire two young poets on Poetry Soup...along with many others. Andrea and you . I remember she having written a beautiful poem on you and now you have reciprocated her gesture of honoring her with another wonderful poem. Lovely !
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Date: 1/17/2022 5:16:00 PM
ahhh, this is so sublime how you took my words and melded them together for this wonderful reverie. Thanks so much for doing this, sweet Ani. I will go to read the one now that you did for Constance. And of course this one gets a fave from ME!!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/18/2022 3:18:00 AM
Ria, thank you so much for allowing me to use your titles for this tribute poem. Its an honor and my pleasure to use your titles for this poem sweet friend. I had in my mind "Nature' as the theme for both the tribute poems, for you and for Constance, and hence I chose the titles accordingly. I know this is not my best, as there are pages of poems from which I can choose the titles, and also there are various options for different themes, but I preferred to stick to the Nature theme. Also am not sure if I have given justice by using your amazing titles creatively well, but I just tried my best in doing so. Big hugs.~ Ani
Date: 1/17/2022 2:15:00 PM
Ani, a lovely poem created as a tribute to Andrea, really beautiful, a FAV ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/18/2022 3:03:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Constance for coming here to read my tribute poem to Andrea...This has been in my mind for a long time, took shape only now...haha...and thank you for the FAV dear friend...~ Ani
Date: 1/17/2022 11:32:00 AM
You are such a wonderful, caring person, Ani. Your poetic skills shine this page with a heartfelt tribute to Andrea.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/18/2022 3:00:00 AM
Thank you Vijayji...Yes, I had always wanted to write a tribute to both Andrea and Constance, using their titles...~ Ani
Date: 1/17/2022 9:52:00 AM
How clever you are, Ani. Andrea will be pleased. Victor
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/18/2022 3:01:00 AM
Yes, I hope Andrea is pleased...
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/18/2022 2:58:00 AM
Thank you Victor ~ Ani

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