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My car hit the ice I have done it twice cars watch out now don't pout I have no advice Date Written: 12/28/2020 Note: Limerick Rhyme 5 Place Winter Snow or Ice Limerick Contest Contest Judged: 1/8/2021 Sponsored by:Tania Kitchin 

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Date: 3/14/2021 6:49:00 AM
Lovely limerick, Paula. Well-deserved win. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 2/28/2021 11:58:00 AM
Love it!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2021 11:51:00 AM
I just found out you sent this. Thanks, for reading and for writing. Glad you love this write. Enjoy your day/week with blessings......................
Date: 1/19/2021 5:27:00 PM
Hi Paula, Your few, sharp lines resonate with me. I've had a couple of car spin outs on black ice. Such a fine limerick. Delightful. Be well. Brian
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/22/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this one. Black ice is not fun just scary. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings
Date: 1/11/2021 4:16:00 AM
Reads like a bad time to be driving. Creative winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. Enjoy your day with blessings
Date: 1/10/2021 12:21:00 PM
Congrats for the win. The end line is priceless.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2021 10:18:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this and said, "The end line is priceless." Enjoy your day with blessings
Date: 1/9/2021 2:54:00 PM
There is “no advice” after you hit ice! Great rhymes.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. One needs the advice before hitting the ice. Enjoy your day with blessings.
Date: 1/8/2021 4:34:00 PM
best not to drive when its icy:-) many congrats Paula:-) hugs jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2021 11:52:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, no driving on ice. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings.
Date: 1/8/2021 12:00:00 PM
Hold on tight and hope for the best! Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/8/2021 12:34:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, hold on tight when on ice. No ice for me. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings
Date: 1/8/2021 9:39:00 AM
Sounds like this poem was written from experience Paula! Have had this experience. Congratulations on your win! Clear roads and blessings to you my friend!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/8/2021 12:32:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yep, from years ago. Only clear roads for me. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings
Date: 1/8/2021 7:42:00 AM
Sounds like every driver here, Congrats on your win Paula!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/8/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Wild drivers???? It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings
Date: 1/8/2021 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Paula! Linda
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/8/2021 12:23:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Enjoy your day with blessings
Date: 1/8/2021 4:30:00 AM
Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/8/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this fun write. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. Enjoy your day with blessings
Date: 12/29/2020 12:48:00 PM
Ice can be dangerous, Paula! Luckily you now have the experience to deal with it in future:) ~ Sending you wishes for a peaceful and healthy new year! // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2020 7:17:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. No more ice for me. "New Year" Today, have joy/blessings
Date: 12/29/2020 9:56:00 AM
Hahaha this one made me laugh like anything especially the last line. Have a great year ahead.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you like this write and it made you laugh. I love to make people laugh. Today, have joy/blessings
Date: 12/29/2020 5:08:00 AM
Slippery, dicey! Be careful!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, ice is very slippery. Have walked and had a car on it many times but no ice here just a write. Today, have joy/blessings
Date: 12/28/2020 11:12:00 PM
Succinct ink ... Nice advice! Love it, Paula -- as long as you're ok!!! :) gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2020 7:10:00 AM
Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this one. I am OK. No ice here just a write. Today, have joy/blessings
Date: 12/28/2020 12:18:00 PM
that is a limerick with some of the shortest lines I ever saw. GREAT job with it, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2020 7:08:00 AM
Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this write. I was fun to do. Today, have joy/blessings
Date: 12/28/2020 10:23:00 AM
Don't take bump her seriously! Aloha! Rico
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2020 7:07:00 AM
Thanks, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this one. Today, have joy/blessings
Date: 12/28/2020 9:21:00 AM
When ice is about, think twice before taking the car out... A good humorous Limerick Paula. Belle
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2020 7:06:00 AM
Thanks, for writing. Glad you like it. Yes, you are so right when you say, "think twice before taking the car out." Today, have joy/blessings