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You shine like a beautiful bright light, Dear. Let a blizzard come and bury me. Let wind toss the sea, causing a tsunami. I will not fret. Thrust in the centre of any storm, I’ve not been lost yet, for always it’s you I see.

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Date: 4/27/2025 7:19:00 AM
Short, sweet, concise, perfect. Congratulations Andrea! :)
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Date: 4/26/2025 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Storms are scary, some very dangerous with some deaths, injuries and destruction of property. It is good to have a stronghold to lean on. Sara K
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Date: 4/24/2025 1:39:00 AM
Congratulations on top placement, Andrea with a beautiful and crisp Etheree.
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Date: 4/24/2025 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your well deserved first placement. You composed an endearing and indeed enduring Etheree that oozes sumptuous imagery and imaginative storytelling Howard
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Date: 4/23/2025 1:50:00 PM
Perfect Andrea. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/3/2025 12:26:00 PM
Andrea, a great description of love and friendship. It does help to have some constant in life that we can turn toward if we have turmoil. You capture this really well. Smiles!!
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Date: 3/27/2025 1:00:00 AM
This is perfect Andrea! Is it for contest? Good luck!
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Date: 3/25/2025 5:51:00 PM
The one who is there in the darkness, in the storm…
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Date: 3/24/2025 11:37:00 PM
This is a very intelligent Etheree, so well composed.
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