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Poetry/Free Verse/Moving Mountains For Me
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1618-387-23
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, January 23, 2024
For the International Contest, I Can Move Mountains
Sponsor, Anoucheka Gangabissoon, Judged 03/02/2024

First Place

Dedicated to every person, kid or adult who has been bullied.

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ever since I can remember I have known bullies it began in grammar school I was different part Ojibway .... they called me Indian Princess but not in a nice way my grandma only found out she had been taken later in life and was brought up white but she embraced her heritage and passed the teachings to me I told my father what they were calling me and he said, they are right you are a Princess ... so the next time they did to my back I swung my long raven hair around smiled and said thank you strength of character can move mountains things were not much better in high school especially the girls ... I suppose it was jealousy I did have a look though I have never considered myself beautiful... but they hated me anyways I did not like school and did not excel though this never stopped me moving mountains when I began working as a nurse I thought things would be better but no they were not and I was bullied by co-workers and even superiors I would look in the mirror and ask why yet, the patients and families loved me and that love moved mountains for me even recently in dance class a few woman are being mean to me, pushing me around these are adults not kids and not wanting to cause a problem I have taken it and turned away but no more, sorry dad the stronger person does not walk away, but speaks up and I am waiting for them to open their mouths please open your evil mouths I have a speech ready I am so strong I can move a mountain and just yesterday a so called friend, was mean to me not the first time, but I have swallowed it before not this time.... enough is enough she was shocked when I said we are finished don't come near me again, or call or message me ever and I walked away .. and gosh that felt good evil comes in many forms but, if a person has strength of character, courage and determination, if one is fearless and a warrior and believes that Jesus is with you after all was he, not bullied .... then, each person can move mountains

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Date: 3/2/2024 5:44:00 PM
Inspiring write! Congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2024 5:24:00 PM
Karen, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, hugs, Constance
Date: 1/24/2024 11:03:00 AM
Nice poem with strong determination. One should have this quality to succeed in life or move the mountains.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2024 8:46:00 PM
Jay, thank you for the compliment and comment, appreciate, Constance
Date: 1/23/2024 1:39:00 PM
Resilience in the face of bullying and adversity is a great subject, Constance. Having experienced bullying throughout different stages of life, and how you have found strength and courage to overcome it. Your excellent word choice is straightforward and emotive, reflecting your raw and honest emotions. You also use figurative language, such as "strength of character can move mountains" and "the stronger person does not walk away, but speaks up," to convey a message of resilience. BOL
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2024 8:47:00 PM
Sotto, thank you for the great comment, and compliment, and encouragement, appreciate very much, Constance

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