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November 11, 2023

"Mother, Magical, Moment" words Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France

POTD - November 13

FIRST  PLACE

shade of vermilion encompassing sky at dawn,  pure fragrance of delightful jasmine in summer,  luminous dew drops quivering on lotus leaves, an almost-forgotten melody from my childhood!  all these and many more… bring the memory of my mother!  I remember her illuminating smile every day, I remember her pray… her eyes closed, her hands folded, her lips uttering lovingly everyone’s name.  she struggled through a war-torn difficult time of the country,  worked hard for raising her own children… and she supported many other children as if they were her own.  she didn’t sleep until the sick and the elderly were taken care of, she didn’t eat until no one was starving around!  every dainty and softest petals of flowers, carries memory of my graceful mother, her body was fragile, her mind was strong, she inspired devotion and dedication to minds around!  she is gone from this world… but she has left her soul in the ethereal colour of the glowing dawn, in the ambrosial scent of her exotic special flower,  chimes ring, soaring from the tranquil temple,  and reminds me of the peace and serenity  I witnessed in my mother. 

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Date: 12/29/2023 8:05:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on being number 7 in the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. I loved reading your wonderful "Mother" write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:19:00 AM
Dear Paula, you are so kind! I love this poem too, being about my mother, who was very kind and spiritual, but at the same time strong and brave. Hope you are having a wonderful holiday. A Happy New Year to you, and your loved ones.
Date: 12/25/2023 9:01:00 PM
Congrats on the well deserved POTD
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Andrea. Hope you are enjoying a great winter vacation! A very Happy New Year to you and your family ( and cat-family)! They are so adorable!
Date: 12/17/2023 11:52:00 AM
A lovely selection for the top 100 new poems, dear poet.
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet-friend. Congratulations on your poem being at the top. Hope you are having a wonderful holiday season! A Happy New Year to you and your loved ones.
Date: 12/5/2023 2:16:00 PM
What a beautiful poetry describing your kind mother! Congratulations Malabika!
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Date: 12/5/2023 2:58:00 PM
Hi Smita! Thank you so much for reading my humble poetry. Are you keeping busy nowadays? are you posting poems here? Really appreciate your sweet, kind comment.
Date: 11/24/2023 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on POTD! Such a wonderful write! Made me think of my mother! I guess, all mothers are the same!! I like the way you find your mother’s presence in everything you see or feel in nature! To my fav!
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Date: 11/24/2023 5:27:00 AM
Dear Krish, Thank you for your beautiful comment. I really do feel her presence in Nature - and remember how she prayed for everyone. I realize, you were very close to your mother too. Just to let you know - I have posted a blog recently with the translation of my story in Bengali - first chapter for now. Always appreciate your support. Thank you for the Fave - feel honoured.
Date: 11/19/2023 10:34:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute which bears witness to a strong woman ... a mother to be proud of. Congratulations on placing 1st, for p/o/t/d/ award, and for a deserved place in my favs, Mala. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 11/19/2023 10:42:00 AM
Dear Paul, how do I thank you enough for being my support! Truly appreciate being included in your Faves. What an honour! Warm wishes ~ Mala
Date: 11/18/2023 7:56:00 AM
Ethereal and so touching Mala . The essence of your Mother and her spirit and heart are palpable in your endearing words laced with love and respect . I especially like the closing line ~ In the ambrosial scent of her exotic special flower …. Congratulations on your first place win and POTD ! Big hugs dear , Susan :)
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Date: 11/18/2023 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Susan. Really appreciate your kind and inspiring words. You are one of the talented poets I look up to, and your comments are so valuable! I still have so much to learn! Love and Hugs, Sweet Susan!
Date: 11/17/2023 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations Malabika on POTD for a touching poem about your lovely mum! Debx
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Date: 11/17/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, Deb. Really appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 11/16/2023 11:10:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on another wonderful win. I loved reading your "Mother" write again. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 11/17/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Paula. Truly appreciate your touching comment.
Date: 11/15/2023 5:36:00 PM
A wonderful memorial tribute to your mother Malabiker. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 11/17/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Belle. Really appreciate your comment.
Date: 11/14/2023 1:46:00 PM
A lovely poem and dedication to your mum.. Congratulations on POTD.. Fully deserving.
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Date: 11/14/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Dear SO. Appreciate your visit and encouraging comment.
Date: 11/14/2023 7:56:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD Malabika! Well-deserved.
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Date: 11/13/2023 6:51:00 PM
Dear Malabika, this is a beautiful, yet emotional tribute to your mother. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Hold each and every memory close, my dear friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 11/13/2023 7:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Brandy. I am sure we all have touching memories of our mothers. Truly appreciate your sweet words - Love and Hugs, Dear Poetess.
Date: 11/13/2023 2:22:00 PM
Congrats on achieving the POTD. Well deserved.
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Truly appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 11/13/2023 1:34:00 PM
Dearest, Mala. This is exquisite in its loveliness with the scent of jasmine and your mother's example of selfless service! I am so happy this was chosen as the POTD for today. It truly touches my heart. Indeed, she has not left us but leaves herself in the work of her hands. Congratulations on your POTD, dear friend! Sending you hugs and much love.
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:27:00 PM
Dearest Sam, your comment is so appreciated! It’s wonderful to believe that our loved ones haven’t left us, they are smiling in our memories! Love and Hugs, Dearest Friend!
Date: 11/13/2023 12:31:00 PM
Back to Congratulate your poem being honored as POTS, Mala. It is well deserved, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognitions! Bill
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:24:00 PM
Dear Bill, yours and Sara’s comments worked! Truly appreciate your support.
Date: 11/13/2023 12:20:00 PM
A beautiful tribute! Congratulations on your POTD, Mala. This is a fave. :)
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:23:00 PM
Dear Evelyn, thank you so much. Your comment and “Fave” are so appreciated!
Date: 11/13/2023 9:39:00 AM
Mummy's rock.
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Paul. I was truly fortunate to have kindest parents!
Date: 11/13/2023 9:16:00 AM
Beautiful....just flat out beautiful, Malabika.
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Dear John. Your comment is precious!
Date: 11/13/2023 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful tribute! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Truly appreciate your comment.
Date: 11/13/2023 7:27:00 AM
Hello dear Mala. Your rejoicing in your mother is so touching and the each stanza exudes loving memories. Congratulations on POTD. :)
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Date: 11/13/2023 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your mother, Mala. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/13/2023 7:21:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Charles. Really appreciate your kind and inspiring words. Best wishes ~
Date: 11/13/2023 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write/tribute to your mother. A lovely ending. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 11/13/2023 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Really appreciate your kind, appreciative comments. Feel blessed with comments from our poet-friends at this site. Love ~
Date: 11/13/2023 6:54:00 AM
Nice tribute poem Malabika. Worthy of potd for sure. My mom passed two weeks ago today. I have many fond childhood memories
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/13/2023 6:38:00 PM
Memories and moments of your mother will always be with you . . .
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/13/2023 7:16:00 AM
Dear Tom, I am so sorry to hear about your Mom's passing away! No one can fill the void a mother leaves for her children. Her memories and her blessings will stay with you for ever. Really appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 11/13/2023 6:23:00 AM
Amazing writing. Just love this. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 11/13/2023 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Gina. Your poems inspire me, and your kind words soothe my heart. Blessings ~
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