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Morning Rose

I dream so often, of the garden stretching out wearing an early morning sun just like a crown. There is the rousing sound of rooster's shout, and mother standing barefoot, dressed in her gown pulling a tall weed, while puttering about looking like a pink cheeked girl, with eyes of brown, clutching a bouquet to her breast. She would hold roses, as if they were treasures made of gold ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/10/2014 4:15:00 PM
What a sweet memory ....Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2014 11:28:00 AM
Beautiful memory Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/6/2014 10:54:00 AM
I am guilty of puttering in the garden in my pj's...love the images this brings to my mind. Congrats.
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Date: 9/5/2014 7:03:00 PM
Oh this is lovely, I could see it perfectly! Great win ;)
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Date: 9/5/2014 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations, CARRIE, 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 6:13:00 PM
Carrie, Another contest, another wonderful poem. You are setting the bar really high for us 'mere mortals'. But seriously, this is another wonderful poem and I always enjoy reading your work. Well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, nice one, a well deserved win xx
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:31:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a great win for this dreamy delight luv..
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:56:00 PM
CARRIE.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 7/3/2011 7:19:00 AM
This is a gem Carrie, congratulations on your great win in Brian's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 7/3/2011 4:53:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win with this poem so intense and beautiful luv..
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:49:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your win...enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:15:00 PM
Wonderful rispetto. The phrasing and imagery are perfect. Congratulations on your winning placement with this excellent poem. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/26/2011 7:58:00 PM
A beautiful ensemble of words and rhyme. No wonder Dr. Ram made this one his top choice in the contest.
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, for the win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Rispetto". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:33:00 PM
Glad to see this toward the top. LIke I said, utterly gorgeous and highest rating if I forgot to rate it before. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:58:00 PM
Simply beautiful Carrie. Many congratulations for this top win.
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your wonderful win in the Rispetto contest with this elegant entry .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/24/2011 1:51:00 PM
Hello Carrie, Congratulations on your win in the contest, this is beautiful. As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/24/2011 1:04:00 PM
I'm reading down the winner's list and I think I like yours the best so far. Congratulaitons on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/24/2011 12:08:00 PM
Just lovely, Carrie! Congratulations on your wonderful IInd Place win in Dr. Ram's Rispetto Contest with this lovely piece! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:01:00 AM
You really brought this garden to life, Carrie, and I enjoyed your comparison of it to a "pink-cheeked girl." Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:53:00 AM
Big Congratulations Carrie, in your tope 3 win. Agape, Moses
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