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More Babies

With a smile as nice as yours.. there really should be two. You favor your mother as I, maybe we could try, making it an even three? Let's make more babies my dear.. Please, oh please, say yes! Fill the world with laughter.. drown out the world's tears, while we while away the years. Your shoulder to mine.. hand holders in love, til the very end, of time.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2022 12:19:00 PM

Rereading this oldie but goodie. I like it so much!

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 2/3/2022 8:20:00 PM

A new baby makes the whole family smile, I had a quiver full. Lovely verse, Richard

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 12/28/2021 3:23:00 PM

Oh yes, babies are such a wonderful gift from God! This is SO sweet! I love this joyful wonderful poem!!

Valsa George

Date: 12/13/2021 8:26:00 PM

Babies are God sent boons . Without a baby, a house will be dull ! We had to wait long twelve years to get a baby. So I know how much happiness a baby can bring. By God's blessings, I have two sons, now grown up. At a time when people say 'No' to baby birth, you long for more babies. May God bless you....

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/28/2021 3:27:00 AM

Hi Richard our two sons and their wives one a specialist opthalmologist and one other an editor who edits for government departments and for 6 years for the mail and guardian have researched the availability of water in 20 - 30 years time and the results are not nice so very sadly for us as we will never have a grandchild, get more puppies they tell us I would love to spoil their babies, but no such luck. There would nothing more in the world that I would want from my children - your third stanza says it all. Too late for us parents though.Hugs and blessings Jennifer Hope you are keeping safe and well.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/1/2021 9:01:00 PM

Jennifer, Well, what to think? So many feelings, I would wish life bring it, for you, for us. What of the fates? They get their due, though... we get to determine what is real.. -Richard

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/6/2021 5:51:00 AM

That's lovely, but I mean how many children you want... Well, may you have them. These days parents have to pay full attention to their kids. Nobody is safe. World is such a messed up place. Parenting is many times difficult then it was before.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2021 3:57:00 PM

this is ADORABLE (but you really want more than two. Two was enough for ME. haha)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/3/2021 3:19:00 PM

yes till the very end of time... lovers forever. Beautiful write ..passionate and hopeful. I love Fill the world with laughter.. drown out the world's tears Lets all join in and do this ..always and forever. Susan :)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 11/4/2021 7:46:00 PM

Hello Susan, Thank you for that my starlight poet. -Richard

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/3/2021 2:49:00 PM

A sweet, heartfelt penning. Enjoyed.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 11/4/2021 6:05:00 AM

M.L., Thanks, what do you think the world needs more of? -Richard

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/3/2021 7:41:00 AM

Upbeat and joyful write--an ode to life and family. Much enjoyed this meaningful write, Richard.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 11/4/2021 6:02:00 AM

Vijay, Thank you for that sir. You've always been watchful, to take a moment to comment. Even for one with head in the clouds. Always brings me back to earth, grounded somehow. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/2/2021 7:25:00 PM

What a sweet love song to your love! That third stanza so encouraging, gives me hope~

Quoth Theraven
Date: 11/4/2021 5:58:00 AM

Michelle, Thanks for the comment. Haven't been writing much of late. -Richard