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Moonlight Serenade

Blindfolded, he takes me from the car through the humid air of August. He holds my hand, and then surrounds me with his arms, when small obstacles appear. He brushes the hair from my forehead, gentling me like a shy colt. The silk rectangular scarf, I had folded and tied about my breasts clings to me. My cutoffs ride up further exciting me, as he lifts me onto a wall. Shushing me, he says. “Sit still, honey.” I have no idea where we are but, his voice and footsteps have a slight echo.

the wail 
of a harmonica:
moonlight serenade

Vibrations tingle across my skin, raising the down on my arms. A bead of sweat mixes with baby lotion and follows a shiver down, from cleavage to navel. Seconds become minutes, as the song caresses me. Oh, how I love him, this long tall drink of water with his huge hands and slow drawl. As the last note hangs in echo, I hear him approach. He lifts me high and traces the droplet down to the top of my hip-huggers with his tongue. I am still blindfolded when he places me on the ground. I feel his breathe upon my mouth. The tip of his tongue plays across my teeth. Ah, I remember him, his face, his hands, his taste, and that night at the empty skating rink…but, sadly, not his name. 

the scarf 
falls from my hands:
the drawer closes


First Published by Contemporary Haibun On-line Winter of 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Wastvedt Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Nice! :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 10:40 PM
Thanks!
Duet Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 11:01 PM
My oh my...what a great memory! I hope it's true. I enjoyed this one so much.
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Enchanting and romantic hugs eve
Martin Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 5:41 PM
Hot, hot. I loved it and was delighted to come across another haibun writer!!!
Lovechild Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Feels more sizzle than serenade, at least from this vantage point. Hot stuff, great write, loved the scintillating attention to detail. Might need a cold shower ;)
Fraser Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:52 PM
I've never witnessed poetry crafted in this way before, I love it. My mind was imaging so much as my mind does, hugs//James :)
May Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:45 PM
You write some beautiful haibuns Debbie....excellent work
Callus Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:57 AM
What can I say, Debbie!! This is vintage poetry that cleverly and with subtle emotions tugs at the heart and imagination. I never hand out favs just for the sake of it...but this one gets it for deserved merits:) fantastic scarf...love the final 3 lines! Hugs // paul
Callus Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:00 AM
note...typo in title:)
Chircop Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Some experiences we'll never forget ..dont We?How sensual this is,and the emotion it transmits.A fsv!How are you ma?Im fine sweety.
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 4:49 AM
This is a brilliant piece.I am a Haibun lover Debbie. This is class I Haibun. Obviously it is in my fav list. You have started first text with' Blindfolded' and second with'Vibrations'. I think these two are keywords.Love>>rajat
Manassian Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Oh Debbie...with memories like that...who needs reality. You really wrote this sensual piece with finesse. Loved it. "This tall drink of water.....how unique! Hugs
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