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Moon Offering

I showed up to church in the buff hands over my ZONE to hide my stuff offering plate came around I dropped it to the ground...... Miss Carlton cried out I've seen enough !!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2010 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem Rick in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol

Mitch White

Date: 7/23/2010 9:36:00 PM

Very funny Rick -Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2010 9:20:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your number one poem in John's contest.. amazing.. awesome.. adventuresome.. enjoyed.. with luv..

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/22/2010 9:47:00 PM

Congrats on your big win Rick!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2010 9:45:00 PM

LOVE IT, Rick. Congratulations!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/22/2010 9:23:00 PM

I knew this was going to be a winner..Im so smart! ha! congrats. BG

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2010 9:09:00 PM

This is really a well written Limerick Parise. it just drips of the page like syrup Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/22/2010 9:09:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on winning with your funny limerick. Joyce

Molly Cooper

Date: 7/21/2010 4:45:00 PM

Too funny! Love it~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2010 3:03:00 PM

HaHa.. what a visual Rick.. good luck in the contest.. don't think u would have made it throught the doors much less the pew..haha.. my entry is "Nymphette"..need I say more? with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/21/2010 12:14:00 PM

Poor Miss Carlton...lol Good one! BG