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written for Hilo Poet contest, not sure if i got this right but wanted to give it a try.
Moon is an Artist
Natural:
The moon is an artist, she sees what ebbs and flows beneath silver-kissed seas.
And in sweet seclusion, she sprinkles cosmic dust upon our warm haven, while locked in pale stillness. And I've heard sapphire rays,
synchronize melodies in unwritten cadence.
But there’s never a song complete, without blushing rare petals of timeless love glazed in lunar flares. So, this I weave in sage blue sparkles, drowning in glowing beams raining from her rose gold halo wings. Will these inked words ever be enough to express how
I am addicted to comets swirling within your cinnamon eyes, amidst the veiled grey skies of
fogs between our stars, heat of the crying crescent never dimmed the light within my hyacinth heart, that’s slowly rising in sync, rhyming within spheres, lost in white topaz
tunes and rhythms, forevermore.
Visual:
The moon is an artist,
she sees what ebbs and flows
beneath silver-kissed seas.
And in sweet seclusion,
she sprinkles cosmic dust
upon our warm haven,
while locked in pale stillness.
And I've heard sapphire rays,
synchronize melodies
in unwritten cadence.
But there’s never a song
complete, without blushing
rare petals of timeless
love glazed in lunar flares.
So, this I weave in sage
blue sparkles, drowning in
glowing beams raining from
her rose gold halo wings.
Will these inked words ever
7 be enough to express how
5 I am addicted,
7 to comets swirling within~
5 your cinnamon eyes,
7 amidst the veiled grey skies of
5 fogs between our stars,
7 heat of the crying crescent
5 never dimmed the light
7 within my hyacinth heart,
5 that’s slowly rising~
7 in sync, rhyming within spheres,
5 lost in white topaz
7 tunes and rhythms, forevermore.
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