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Monoku - Final Gasp

oh my final gasp and breath in this earthly realm- it was beautiful . . . ________________________ December 26, 2018 Poetry/Monoku/final gasp Copyright Protected, ID 18-1098-349-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, The Last Line sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/30/2018 1:09:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:54:00 PM
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Anne-Lise thanks for the congratulations ~
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/30/2018 5:27:00 AM
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BIG CONGRATS to win. Happy New Year.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:54:00 PM
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Anisha, thanks for the congrats ~
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/29/2018 3:43:00 PM
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Congratulations, I knew this one would place, well done!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:55:00 PM
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Michelle, thanks for the congratulations ~
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/29/2018 10:01:00 AM
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Hi BW Good one-liner. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:55:00 PM
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Alexis, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations ~
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Silent One
Date: 12/29/2018 6:49:00 AM
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Uplifitng one liner... Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2019 9:56:00 PM
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Silent, thanks for the contest and for my placement ~
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/26/2018 8:32:00 PM
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Indeed...Some people are so heavenly minded that they miss the earthly realm.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2018 4:41:00 PM
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Pashang, thanks for the visit ~
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/26/2018 5:06:00 PM
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Hopefully you take with you all the beauty you have shared...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2018 4:40:00 PM
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Thank you Michelle for that nice comment ~
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/26/2018 11:30:00 AM
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Very nice Constance, looks like another winner!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2018 4:40:00 PM
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John, thanks for visiting and the compliment, appreciate ~
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/26/2018 9:14:00 AM
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I love your Monoku, Dear Heart, our memories of life keeps on going on with us. Happy Holidays .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2018 9:16:00 AM
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Eve, thanks for the visit and compliment, appreciate ~
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2018 9:08:00 AM
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And so was your entry. Loved this. Best wishes in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2018 9:14:00 AM
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Chris, thanks for visiting and for the love ~
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/26/2018 9:04:00 AM
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We fervently hope for all that it will be, best wishes Dear Heart...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2018 9:15:00 AM
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Charlie, thanks for visiting and commenting, appreciate ~

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