Monkey

with merry mischief
swinging from branch to branch
our crude ancestor

animalcrazynaturehaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/26/2022 8:45:00 AM

I can tell by looking that he is one of my ancestors, Valsa.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2022 4:17:00 AM

We do share DNA but we were made in God's imagine so not our ancestor. When God made humans, He said that it was good, very good. Thank you for your visit to my page and may this Easter be the best for you and yours. Sara

Anil Deo

Date: 4/16/2022 7:54:00 PM

WELL, not our true ancestor, only as far as crude science goes. LOL!

JCB Brul

Date: 4/15/2022 7:27:00 PM

My kind of Haiku! Superb descriptions !! Even without the picture I can vividly imagine!! All the best!

Bill Baker

Date: 4/14/2022 4:36:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Valsa. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/14/2022 1:10:00 PM

I watch them bouncing and making trouble, and they appear to be very clever. Valsa, your Haiku is well written.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 4/14/2022 12:11:00 PM

merry mischief! ha ha ha! When they get into homes and steals, makes mess in some cities and villages, i suppose then it doesn't stay merry!! and crude ancestor, that's right! but we descendants still find ourselves now & then crude! great Haiku dear poet Valsa! - thanks Marshall