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Sat at my easel your image is taking shape, where is the love gone! I try to ignite your eyes with loving strokes…. my tears falll Penned 13/4/2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/29/2017 5:32:00 PM

Hello Seren, nice to meet you.This is a sad love poem A 7

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/29/2017 6:30:00 PM

Hello Darlene thank you for commenting . Nice to meet you too.......Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/19/2017 5:31:00 AM

I echo Arthur. A Fav!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/17/2017 5:29:00 PM

This is really really good! A Fav!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/15/2017 1:13:00 PM

Difficult to write as well. The eyes are a direct link to the heart and must be perfect to represent the person drawn. Thanks for sharing this piece, Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2017 7:24:00 PM

I echo Lukas and Paul. Beautiful!!

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 4/14/2017 2:46:00 PM

beautiful :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/14/2017 5:21:00 PM

thank you so much...Seren

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2017 2:34:00 PM

Sad, but beautiful, Seren! Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 4/13/2017 8:33:00 AM

So sad Seren. I can picture this.

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/13/2017 8:40:00 AM

Hi Tim thanks for commenting.....Seren