Misunderstood Muse

Oh my misunderstood muse - 
love and life;
It's not just a hobby -
It's my dream,
but demons in my mind 
                                  run wild at night....
So there won't be any poetry tonight.
Nothing to say, 
                     to see nor to write...

My quill 
does not care 
for the combination of 
April and Spring flowers,
nor merrily singing sparrows,
building nests, 
preparing for birth.
I've not left the season 
of bitter death.
I refuse to express, 
as it's a confession,
so, I let my garden succumb 
to deadly suppression.

Oh my misunderstood muse,
if not here, 
then where will I find clarity?
Telling you my truth 
was difficult.
Each second 
is a nemesis to my identity,
so I'm burning pages 
of time to ashes.

An absence of 
                   subtle reflection in words,
becomes a substance of 
                                  proverbial subsistence,
as reflections of 
                      past poems torment 
in fluorescent flashes.

I'm confused with the 
existence of timeless distance.
Remember when 
we listened to the stunned stars,
as the miserable moon 
hid behind clouds,
resembling the shadows of 
                                      your manipulative lies.

Insistence of your resistance cries,
seems like a waste of emotions,
in a false dawn of devotions.
You used to make me laugh like crazy,
as we danced among roses and daisies,
but we struggled to 
create perfect harmonies,
ignoring simple sincere symphonies.

Oh my misunderstood muse,
I've drained all of your ink...
Burying you in an 

unmarked grave.

Now your predicament will not breed,
nor succeed in its egotistical need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Babcock Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Very creative and well said in your poem. Sometimes I think my muse is on a long holiday. Love your words. love phyl
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 12:27 AM
What an amazing emotional poem. In my honest opinion i do feel that misunderstood or not you do create beautiful poetry. A fave for me ...Hugs
Empress Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 5:21 AM
Oh silent muse, in your silence, floats so many powerful and soul stirring emotions, so well expressed with brilliant wordplay and use of alliterations. I am in awe of your word weaving and so many lines in this stood out for me. And so many words resonate too with me as i feel the same, sometimes especially as i read this, i cant help but think of how accurate this is. The way youv phrased your emotions is what stands out, as they are authentic and so very personal, plus leaves an introspective
Empress Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 5:22 AM
Touch. I felt the lines “ Oh my misunderstood muse, I've drained all of your ink... Burying you in an unmarked grave. Now your predicament will not breed, nor succeed in its egotistical need.“ that hits so deep and strong! You really a gifted poet, that weaves not just words but thoughts that readers would strongly feel and be in awe of! Youv nailed it! I love this
Buehler Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 10:19 PM
Silent One, your deep, introspective poem is so well articulated and meaningful. I love, 'You used to make me laugh like crazy, as we danced among roses and daisies' Wonderful writing!
George Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 8:03 PM
A poet is a very sensitive person. His flow of emotions can sometimes be interrupted by some crisis he faces., In such cases, he may pause for some time to clear his mind. In your case, stating of even such a situation becomes so poetic, and poetry flows from you like a swift flowing river whose water cannot be blocked even by building a dam. Silent One, I can read between the lines. Relax man.... and take things in their stride.
Baker Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:52 PM
No two poets are exactly alike in their mode of inspiration or their use of a muse, Silent One. Each of us will identify with different parts of your poem today. I struggle with a tendency to write almost meaningless poetry sometimes just to keep writing. It seems less than honorable to me. Maybe I press to write too much, maybe quality is better than quantity in writing of poetry? Thanks for the thought-provoking poem, and I hope you find the answers to your questions. Have a great week
Poet Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 4:10 PM
Your eloquent words, my friend, beautifully convey deep emotions and thoughts through metaphorical lines. Sharing my truth was a challenging endeavor, as every moment felt like a battle against my own sense of self. Your honesty and vulnerability showcase the intricate nature of artistic expression. This introspective and personal piece reminds us that creativity often arises from moments of darkness and doubt.
Rodgers Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Dear Silent one, What a tumultuous journey of creativity and self-discovery. Your words develop the internal struggles and contradictions that plague the creative soul. The imagery of battling demons, grappling with identity, and confronting past traumas is hauntingly beautiful. Your raw honesty and vulnerability speak volumes about the complexities of artistic expression. What a wonderful and deeply personal and introspective piece—it's that creativity often emerges from the depths of darkness and uncertainty. Your voice is a beacon of authenticity amidst the chaos of existence. - Blessings, Daniel
Rose  Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 2:02 PM
Your muse is waiting for your golden quill, and your beautiful mind, :)
Herrick Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 12:38 PM
..."I'm confused with the existence of timeless distance. Remember when we listened to the stunned stars, as the miserable moon hid behind clouds, resembling the shadows of your manipulative lies..." That is scorpionic mastery ! Dayum ! Lol. That kicks ass. The whole poem. Excellence as always, Silent One.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 11:33 AM
What we want “ You used to make me laugh like crazy, as we danced among roses and daisies,” yet often not what we feel. Sometimes we come to a halt and don’t know how to go forward. I know your muse has not spilled all its ink, interlinked in past, present, and future, interweaving with new colors, sights, sounds, life and yes, suffering and death. Hugs ~ Kim
Beaufort Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Silent One, sounds like the person in the poem is having a difficult time. Relationships are always difficult. You're so right that our heart lets us know when to call it quits!
DiMino Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Excellent, down to earth, honest write. "Each second is a nemesis to my identity, so I'm burning pages of time to ashes." I throw away far more than I publish, a waste paper basket marked "Muse". "I'm confused with the existence of timeless distance. Remember when we listened to the stunned stars, as the miserable moon hid behind clouds, resembling the shadows of your manipulative lies." Great poetry. Love it!
Pandit Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:43 AM
Well delivered, my friend, in wonderful metaphoric lines of thoughts. Intensity of emotions is felt throughout, SO. ---Telling you my truth was difficult. Each second is a nemesis to my identity, so I'm burning pages of time to ashes-- and so much more!
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Well, sometimes it takes just the right moment in time for a poem to manifest itself plus the right mood or emotion. Sometimes we need to take a vacation then sometimes just read a lot of very good poetry by some famous writers. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Kaufman Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Dear Silent One, This is tormenting and so self revealing in it's anguish. Please, please, don't dare bury your muse as I am most certain those grave robbers will come and dig it up. All joking aside, this was very well penned.
Mcintosh Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:52 AM
Such an amazing write - the muse can be so wonderful while, at times, so tired and breathless. Yes... misunderstood, but always - as you've shown me with this poem, a muse worthy of generous portions of thanks for such preciousness. Beautiful as always. God bless you with much love and much more of your beautiful muse. Love, Gina
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