Home » Poems » Sara Kendrick » Mist Upon The Water

Sara Kendrick | + Follow Poet |

Mist Upon The Water

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Kendrick.

SPREWELL BLUFF PARK (Thomaston) - All You Need to Know BEFORE You Go

Mist upon the water Breezes rip through trees Smoke's aroma 'pon the air Sometimes causes a sneeze The river flows faster and is stained It has been out of its banks again Flowing on to the ocean Where all earth's water blends A constant fight with nature Those who try to maintain_ lose 'Tis a lovely place to sojourn Peaceful beauty, my muse

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/24/2024 6:59:00 AM

Mystical and enchanting Sara. I can be mesmerized by a rolling river, as I can by a roaring fire. Many thanks for the imagery. hugs and blessings, Linda :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/24/2024 8:32:00 AM

Linda, Yes, a river or the ocean can keep our attention with what is going on around us. thanks for the smiley face. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 2/24/2024 4:39:00 AM

Absolutely adorable read here many blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/24/2024 8:31:00 AM

Why, thank you, Yolanda. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 2/24/2024 2:21:00 AM

A beautiful slice of Nature, very calming and lovely to behold."Flowing on to the ocean Where all earth's water blends" Yes, each river has a destination and a purpose for its journey, to join the ocean! Beautifully written Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/24/2024 3:39:00 AM

Glad it was calming, Valsa. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 2/23/2024 11:02:00 PM

A lovely Rhyme poem, Sara. Soothing to read. The beauty of nature is unlimited. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/24/2024 3:39:00 AM

There is always something in nature of which to write. Thank you for dropping by Bill. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/23/2024 4:46:00 PM

there's something calming and inspirational about a river...you captured it beautifully with your imagery including a concern for the environment. Well done, Sara K. Have a splendid evening, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/24/2024 3:38:00 AM

Thank you, Sara B. The night was good, but I could have slept longer. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/23/2024 12:12:00 PM

Dear Sara, your poem is truly awe-inspiring. It possesses a remarkable ability to maintain a lively rhythm and skillfully employs vivid imagery, all while addressing important environmental themes. Your writing beautifully captures the magnificence of nature.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2024 2:18:00 PM

Glad you think so, Lasaad. Your visits always are inspiring. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/23/2024 11:34:00 AM

Hi Sara! Your title immediately set up a beautiful, serene and mystical picture with the sustained cadence of a flowing river. Beautiful writing! Blessings!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2024 2:17:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. I need all the blessings I can get, and the beautiful writing was uplifting. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/23/2024 10:43:00 AM

Sara, An impressive environmental poem that sustains itself with sprightly rhythm and deft imagery. Nature’s splendours reflected in your writing Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2024 2:16:00 PM

Glad to see your comments on my page. I hope that you enjoyed the reading. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 2/23/2024 6:46:00 AM

“ Peaceful beauty, my muse” ah nature too is my muse, so beautiful how youv written this dear sara, your way with words truly is so impressive and soulful! I loved this poem especially the flow and cadence. Hope weather is treating you fine too. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2024 8:35:00 AM

IE, we had rain early this morning about getting up time and I think maybe some thunder and lightning in the night, but the sun is out now and there is a northerly breeze bringing us a cooling off about 20 degrees lower than yesterday, but still spring like. Thanks for the visit. Sara K