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Missed the Mark

Mark shot his arrow on Saturday It never returned, just sped away It took a wrong turn – turbo afterburn Maybe it will be back on Friday

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/23/2021 4:03:00 PM

This is actually super!! That last line is a real boomeranger, Linda! A FAVE limerick for me. Thanks, gw

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/23/2021 5:51:00 PM

Oh thanks a ton gw! They are fun to write. Thanks for stopping by with a FAVE :) Linda

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/23/2021 11:47:00 AM

Maybe and maybe not. Snicker. Snicker.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/23/2021 2:19:00 PM

Thanks Caren. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Linda

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/11/2021 10:00:00 AM

Into the stratosphere Linda and maybe on into orbit, but what goes up, Great rhyming with levity, cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/11/2021 5:44:00 PM

Thanks David! Linda

Constance La France

Date: 2/10/2021 4:43:00 PM

Linda, lol, fun limerick, well done _Constance

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/10/2021 4:53:00 PM

Thanks Constance. That means a lot coming from you! :) Linda

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/10/2021 7:32:00 AM

The arrow should have stopped and asked someone for directions.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/10/2021 12:14:00 PM

I guess it was on a mission. :) Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2021 1:32:00 PM

very cute one!!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/9/2021 2:55:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! Linda

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/9/2021 10:32:00 AM

Hopefully in time for valentines day Linda, your on a roll with these. Keep em rollin. Hope you're well Tom

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/9/2021 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Tom. Alive and kicking'...just rollin' along ;) Linda