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Miracle Moment

reflecting rainbow
wide open gape haunts the lake…
a whippoorwill calls

© Harry J Horsman 2022

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/3/2022 9:22:00 PM

I love the images evoked by this beautiful haiku, Harry. The mention of whippoorwills brings back pleasant memories. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 4/26/2022 5:26:00 PM

Your imagery paints a lovely picture in this well written Haiku. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2022 4:25:00 AM

I wonder is it early morn or early evening. Very creative work you have penned. My whip-poor-will is back for about a week now. I enjoy hearing him call. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 4/16/2022 7:12:00 AM

You describe a beautiful moment in time, Harry. I still have to hear a live whippoorwill call! ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/12/2022 11:59:00 AM

Interesting imagery, dear Harry!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2022 8:31:00 AM

Hello hh - Hi. You grace us with wonderful imagery to just sit and meditate on and to see(smile). Thank you as always for sharing your talent with us. Blessings always. May this day find you well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2022 3:15:00 PM

REALLY good work, Harry. Just like a haiku should be

Silpika Kalita

Date: 4/10/2022 7:34:00 PM

In two words "creatively creative "

Debra L Brown

Date: 4/10/2022 1:30:00 PM

Harry, I liked the picture you painted. The last time I heard a whippoorwill was when I was 12, brought back memories, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra

Judy Ball

Date: 4/9/2022 10:12:00 AM

Nature lover that I am this really speaks to me bringing back bitter sweet memories of my dogs that have gone on before me walking in the wee hours of the morning the stars overhead, and the call of the Loon on the lake.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/9/2022 8:57:00 AM

Harry, this haiku conveys a lovely picture and presents a stunning scenario to the reader. I can envision the scene thanks to your wonderful imagery!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/9/2022 6:20:00 AM

Excellent haiku, Harry--paints an appealing scene! Janice