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Miltonic Poem - Cycles

To break the cycles of dependency webs that entrap the soul, whether it be drug related or alcoholic spree Law rules, though blatant is the tendency for stopping ears of rationality of wise men, when those in ignorance flee Marketable gains stir greeds avid glee in gaining control of humanity Recreational scene, a conjuror's trick of a white rabbit out of a top hat Applause, again, again, do it again Then who will make the conjuror's wand flick So, everyone, wants to do just that Alcohol, drugs, how, why, is there no shame. Date: 16/4/14

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Date: 5/14/2014 12:09:00 AM
congratulations Theresa. A very timely piece. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/14/2014 8:05:00 AM
Hi Joyce, So kind of you to send your very welcome comments. Thank you, Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Theresa! Cheers, Roy
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Date: 5/14/2014 8:07:00 AM
Hi Roy, So pleased you read this poem and for your support. All the best Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations! A topic that needs to be addressed and so desperately needs an answer.
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:33:00 PM
Hi, Thank you for reading and taking the time to make contact with your very kind comments. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 2:48:00 PM
Such a timely subject and beautifully approached! Well done, Theresa! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:34:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Thank you for your very supportive comments which are most appreciated. All the best, Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 1:17:00 PM
Great topic about which to pen a winning poem..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:31:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you for your contacting and I am very pleased to receive your lovely comment. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 1:12:00 PM
THERESA, Congratulations:) in Craig's, "Miltonic Sonnet" contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:32:00 PM
Hi Linda, I appreciate your very kind comments. All the best to you, Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 12:42:00 PM
It makes you wonder what the world is coming to...doesn't it? Wonderful Miltonic sonnet,Theresa. Lainie
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:35:00 PM
Hi Elaine, So grateful to receive your support and thank you for reading my poem. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 9:56:00 AM
Nice visuals on this one! Great job, Theresa! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:44:00 AM
Hi Lisa, Good of you to read and take the time to visit and send your lovely comments, many thanks. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 9:31:00 AM
Wonderful write Theresa! U r right it's a vicious cycle that moves on n on unending !! Congrats really a great pen n a win !
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:47:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, I am so delighted to receive such praiseworthy comments from you. Thank u so much. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 5/13/2014 9:26:00 AM
Very good poem, Theresa! And it goes on...and on; could call it the wheel of shame where the spokes are many, including drugs, alcohol, etc. // congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:49:00 AM
Hi Paul, Always good to receive your very supportive comments. Much appreciated. All the best Theresa xx
Date: 4/28/2014 6:51:00 PM
I meant social THEME!!! For his contest.
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:50:00 PM
Let's STOP the MADNESS. sorry, that is what came into my mind reading the last few lines of this one. Good social poem!!
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Date: 4/18/2014 2:51:00 PM
This is quite good I think. I going crazy trying to conquer this form. BG
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Date: 5/13/2014 10:56:00 AM
Hi Barbara, Thank you for reading and sending your welcome comment. I too find all the various styles of poetry mind boggling at times. Regards Theresa xx