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Judge Horner issued a decree that elections take place this week  For the positions of mayor and sheriff in the town of Milton Creek  It had now been nearly four years and was somewhat overdue  Some known names were mentioned and some nobody knew. Rumour had it John Scultz of the Cactus Ranch was running for mayor It was also rumoured he’d ridden with the notorious outlaw Jack Nayer Jim Brown his foreman was running for town sheriff, another lowlife Although it was never proved, there was talk he murdered his wife. Posters of Mayor Tom, Sheriff Koplin, John Scultz and Jim Brown  Were now appearing in prominent places all over Milton Creek town  John and Jim came into town and headed for Jan's Saloon, The Manx And tried buying everyone drinks but many townsfolk said, "No thanks".  John Scultz was telling people about all the changes that he'd make Putting posters of himself all over town though was his big mistake Two Pinkerton men were passing through on their way to Santa Fe And they both checked into Lin's Aces hotel for an overnight stay.  One took a close look at a poster of John Scultz that was on a post And then turned to his partner who looked like he'd seen a ghost  They checked in with Lin then headed over to see Sheriff Koplin  One said, "We think Scultz is Jack Nayer's side kick, Marcus Damin".  The Sherrif said, "He rarely comes into town; sends his men to the store  And it’s said that he hails from Maryland from a small farm in Baltimore “ One of the Pinkerton men said "I'll telegraph our office in Sacramento And ask them to send over an update and everything that they know". They left Sheriff Koplin's office and then headed for Jan's Saloon Scultz's men were there, and they heard that he'd be coming soon An hour later Scultz walked in and started buying folks whiskey  The Pinkertons just observed, an approach would have been risky.  The next day a telegram arrived with some valuable information  From the description they'd sent it confirmed Scultz was Damin The Pinkertons told Sheriff Koplin that we'll need armed men To ride out to the Cactus Ranch and apprehend Marcus Damin. Judge Horner then called on Duke, Mike, and Sheriff Koplin  Along with, Ranger David, Terry, and Winchester toting Lin Along with the two Pinkerton’s, Bob Drew, and Ned Forrest They would ride out to the ranch that day to make an arrest.  Mayor Tom said "I'll get some beds ready at Lin's hotel  Because it won't be easy and you might be riding into hell I'll ask Tania, Deb, Jan, and Anne-Lise to be on standby  Because I guarantee it will be bloody, and bullets will fly". The eight riders mounted their horses and headed out of town And they hoped to get to the Cactus Ranch just before sundown  They had supplies and Winchesters and enough ammo for a week  After an hour they stopped for a rest and coffee at Cactus Creek . Feeling refreshed they carried on and then the ranch came into view  The tension was now mounting; how it would end nobody knew  They were about fifty yards from the house when a shot rang out Quick as lightening they dismounted diving for cover in a dugout.  They returned fire and the strong smell of gun smoke filled the air The Pinkerton's were trigger happy and fired without any care Bob shouted out, "We've got a warrant for you Marcus Damin And one for you Jim Brown and the rest of your low life vermin". Someone from the ranch shouted" Burn in hell, we're not surrendering None of you are welcome here, It’s private land and you're trespassing" "I've an idea," said Sheriff Koplin with a grin on his face, " I'll smoke em out And trust me this siege will soon be at an end and of that I've no doubt".  He said, "Cover me" and then started running quickly, firing as he went The posse kept on firing their Winchesters until their ammo was spent  There was no response from inside the ranch, the ruse had worked well So, he climbed on top of the ranch house roof; prepared to give them hell.  He covered the hot chimney with his Stetson and held it firmly in place  And he found it quite amusing and struggled to keep a straight face Down below he could hear coughing from the effects of the smoke And it wouldn't be too long before those down below started to choke.  His idea had worked as he’d planned then heard someone shout “Hold your fire, we are all surrendering and we're coming out” The posse moved forward ready to take them all into custody  Then one of the gang drew a weapon but Lin was quicker than he.  He fell on the ground holding his leg that was bleeding profusely  Lin didn't take any chances, and she moved forward cautiously  Bob shouted out, "Put your hands up in the air and keep still Anyone who dares makes a move I'll send them to Boot Hill". The posse checked them for concealed weapons only finding a knife Sheriff Koplin's brilliant idea had no doubt prevented any loss of life It was now late evening and quite dark; the sun had long gone down  So, they secured the prisoners with chains and headed back to town.  They locked up the prisoners in the jail and then headed for the saloon All were keen to hear the results for the election; they'd be ready soon Judge Horner stood up and said "All votes have been counted and are in For the position of Mayor, it's Tom Cunningham; for Sherrif, Mark Koplin. The saloon erupted with loud cheers everyone was in a celebratory mood For one night only Jan declared a free bar until midnight with plenty of food  Mayor Tom then got up to thank everyone present and then had this to say “I've ordered a new Stetson for Sheriff Koplin because he saved the day”. The sheriff’s trick was the talk of the town, Tom nicknamed him ‘Smokey’ But for his quick thinking that day it could have easily ended in tragedy Everyone was in a jubilant mood with lots of whiskey and cold beer flowing And with her angelic voice Tania was on top form with her beautiful singing. Written on 4th July 2025

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Date: 7/4/2025 5:31:00 PM
A great tale of Milton Creek’s election week Tim. Enjoyed the read… Beryl
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 10:59:00 PM
Thank you Beryl, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're enjoying the sunshine. Tom
Date: 7/4/2025 4:21:00 PM
Hmm, Milt Creek sounds like Gunfight at the Not O.K. Corral, but it also reminds me of Rock Ridge in Blazing Saddles!
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Date: 7/4/2025 11:21:00 PM
The gunfight at the ok corrall remains a controversial subject, did the Earps act outside the law, the jurys still out on that one. I'm not much into comedy westerns but Blazing Saddles was quite funny.
Date: 7/4/2025 2:02:00 PM
Tom - I always enjoy your Milton Creek tales and love the fact that they keep Milton’s memory alive. I could always count on him for a supportive comment and know that if he were still around, he’d call out anyone acting in a way that violated the spirit of the Soup. Thank you for this delightful continuation of the saga…
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 3:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Ilene, like you say he supported everyone on soup and is still missed on here. I've been out of time for a while as I was working on a slideshow for a forthcoming family reunion. Thought I'd never get it done,thankfully I did so easing myself back in. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 7/4/2025 9:32:00 AM
Tom, I’ll have to comment again since Tommy deleted my comment. Lowlife hombres is a term we’ve used with regard to bad guys in the Creek several times. It seems he took offense at my use of those words and labeled it ‘hateful rhetoric,’ which was not meant for any poet. He’s the only one who uses the word ‘hate,’ so maybe he should stop pointing his finger at me and my friends assuming we write hate poems.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/4/2025 1:20:00 PM
Thanks, Mayor. :-)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for your return visit Lin, the old west was full of lowlifes and these lowlifes I refer too are fictional and certainly not aimed at anyone on here or anywhere. For the record I've never seen you write a hateful poem on here or anywhere else for that matter. Tom
Date: 7/4/2025 9:04:00 AM
WOW!!! What another creative write/story/picture you have here about Milton Creek. Glad you have added another chapter to your wonderful tale. Always a joy to read. Great Ending but I missed the party. Glad to see we have Mayor Tom Cunningham and Sheriff Mark Koplin in our small town. This story would be wonderful for a book. Maybe??? Hope you are OK... Have a very blessed day/weekend writing away...............
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 11:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula, I'm slowly coming back in after I'd taken a break to compose a slideshow. I'm on vacation at the moment but I'll be back soon. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 7/4/2025 8:54:00 AM
Lowlife hombres? So sad to see that such hateful rhetoric continues. Thankfully, it's just a (very small) noisy handful. Wishing all a happy, healthy weekend. Hey, my supporters are all theocrats so should be an interesting race...
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/4/2025 10:26:00 AM
Nah. I have many supporters who would disagree and who find me very pleasant, as the support for my poetry affirms resoundingly. Instead I will repeat, have a pleasant weekend. I know you've dealt with hardship recently
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/4/2025 10:09:00 AM
There’s nothing pleasant about you. My comment was given the way I explained it and have used it while commenting on Milton Creek sagas several times. I’ve no need to fool anyone. My reference was to you calling my comment ‘hateful rhetoric’ which it assuredly is not. If you insist as you most often do to have the last word, take another swing at me.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/4/2025 9:42:00 AM
I didn't delete anything. You're not fooling anyone. Your comment's meaning is clear and references my comment below. You do this often. Have a pleasant weekend with family
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/4/2025 9:25:00 AM
Afraid of my comment Tommy? Enough to delete it?
Date: 7/4/2025 8:43:00 AM
There will only be one mayor and one sheriff in Milton Creek. I’ll introduce an amendment to put that into the town charter at the next meeting. The integrity of the town will be preserved as much as Milton was a man oh honor. We are a close knit community and despite what lowlife hombres try to walk our streets and run for office, they will never be in control of Milton Creek. Only decent travelers will be welcome to visit or reside in town. Tom, thank you for keeping Milton’s memory alive.
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Date: 7/4/2025 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Lin, First of all I admired Milton who was a man of honour and I wouldn't tarnish his memory by writing hateful poetry on here or anywhere. If any one thinks this is aimed at anyone or written as a hateful poem then speak up. Complain and let admin decide, it's written to keep Milton's name alive and a bit of humour thrown in, nothing more nothing less. Tom
Date: 7/4/2025 8:00:00 AM
three cheers for Mayor Tom and Sherrif Koplin, perhaps between you you can clean up soup and make it sweet with real poets who write their own poetry. Free bar at the Manx if you can do it!! hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 8:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan, only poets who write their own words allowed in Milton Creek. Will be having a meeting with Sheriff Koplin to discuss a way forward. Like the idea of the free bar lol. Tom
Date: 7/4/2025 7:01:00 AM
Tom, what a tale, so well penned and entertaining. Thanks for including me as well. I love these saga's. A fav.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 7:08:00 AM
PS, hope you voted for me lol
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 7:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Tania, glad you enjoyed it. Slideshow all done so I'll slowly ease myself back in. Thanks too for faving it. Noticed lots of new names on here, I've got plenty of catching up to do. Tom
Date: 7/4/2025 6:40:00 AM
Nefarious characters abound in your poetic sagas. Just like the old westerns, it's sometimes hard to distinguish who the good guys are from the bad guys when everyone owns a gun. Nevertheless, this whimsical tale is just the kind of fictional distraction PS needs right now to heal from all the AI angst. For that I say kudos
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/4/2025 6:08:00 PM
I’m preparing my nooses but think I’m gonna need more rope.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/4/2025 4:43:00 PM
Ahhh Keefer, you'll feature prominently in my upcoming Soup Creek saga.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/4/2025 4:14:00 PM
I’m applying for The Hangman position.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 7:42:00 AM
Lol, I'm all for democracy.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/4/2025 7:27:00 AM
Oh btw, I'm running for mayor in opposition. Hope there'll be no mudslinging ;)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/4/2025 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Tom, I heard about all the shenanigans going on of late. I'd taken a break as I was working on a slideshow for a family reunion, thankfully it's all done now. Love stories of the old west and get inspired by all the books I read. There will be no AI in my writes as it wasn't invented back then lol.

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