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The mill wheel wouldn’t turn until the spring. The winter had been icy and so cold, and something in our town was happening. Two girls had run away (as I’d been told). I can’t recall where I got the news from. Authorities did not suspect foul play. The girls were friends and both of them had come from families from which kids run away! Whispers ran through town from door to door. The girls were lesbians, some folks just guessed. There was a thing that no one could ignore. The city life for “their” kind was the best. One man in town alone knows they are dead, and of those girls the butcher never speaks. Rumors of their murder soon will spread. Ice melts, revealing secrets – wheel creaks. July 21, 2018 for Viv Wigley's 'One, nine, sixteen v3.0' Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/30/2018 8:31:00 AM
Very chilling, but a great story for the theme, Andrea. Congratulations on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:16:00 AM
I liked this a lot. Love the twist in the end. A nice creepy poem from you and it's not even Halloween. ; )
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. I really enjoyed this. Elaine
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A great story for the lines. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/24/2018 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations! Well written and interesting.
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Date: 7/24/2018 4:09:00 AM
Andrea, back to say congrats on your well deserved win. John
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Date: 7/24/2018 2:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your grand win.
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Date: 7/24/2018 1:21:00 AM
Congrats on a fine write, Andrea, and thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
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Date: 7/23/2018 6:39:00 PM
Sadly that is the end for many run-aways; you've penned the scene quite clearly here.
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Date: 7/22/2018 3:22:00 PM
A very well constructed story from the dark side, best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 7/22/2018 11:25:00 AM
A sad ending that many runaways face.. Well penned Andrea..
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Date: 7/22/2018 9:27:00 AM
What a good story. I love lurid detective thrillers! Good write.
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Date: 7/22/2018 7:28:00 AM
Well written, as always! A sad story, but true to life..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 7/22/2018 5:33:00 AM
A chilling tale Andrea and sadly I can imagine this type of thing happening for real as there is such prejudice against these types of relationships:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2018 5:26:00 AM
You did this so well. I had already forgotten this contest was still going on. Good luck. I'm sure it's a winner. :)
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Date: 7/22/2018 2:10:00 AM
A gruesome tale for a Sunday morning. Well written Andrea. Tom
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:09:00 AM
I love this story, Andrea. Extremely well written!
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Date: 7/21/2018 9:35:00 PM
Ooooh chilling mystery Andrea. Bet you could write for a soap opera! I think Viv will enjoy this one a lot! : )
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Date: 7/21/2018 8:32:00 PM
Wow! Andrea, your poem is dark with intrigue and suspense and reads like a thriller. A compelling write that’s smooth with a great storyline and wonderful rhymes. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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