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Mill Wheel

MILL WHEEL The mill wouldn't turn until the Spring The winter, quiet and hushed, maintained silence Time passed slowly, almost at a standstill Not even the birds were heard to sing Harsh days lay ahead, days that were yet to unfold And the hard cold grip of the winter months Were soon to break their bond on the town people Then, and only then, the grisly story would be told Whispers ran through the town from door to door But the truth was still a mystery yet to be determined Nothing would stop the wagging tongues of gossip The sound of silence was not evident any more The constant babble of what might have been done Was being whispered in quiet, hushed guesses No one knew the absolute truth, only conjecture Ice melts, revealing secrets - wheel creaks At the bottom of the mill pond, the answer now is found The disaster that held a town spellbound so long Was in full view for all the town to witness The farmers missing cow - had fallen in and drowned 2 July 2018 For the contest sponsored by Viv Wigley

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Date: 7/30/2018 8:43:00 AM
This held me in suspense until the end, Curtis. Well done, and congrats on your placement. Sandra
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:54:00 AM
I enjoyed this so much, Curtis. Many congrats on your win. elaine
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/28/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine. Glad you enjoyed it. There is another poem entitled Chappell's Mill which is a true story about an old mill in my hometown. Although it is no longer in service, it is an historical part of Dublin, Georgia history.
Date: 7/25/2018 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great story and imagery. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/25/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! I always look forward to your comments, knowing they will be there and encourage me. I appreciate your support.
Date: 7/24/2018 1:29:00 AM
Clever write, Curtis, thanks for entering my humble contest. Congrats! regards, Viv
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/24/2018 6:53:00 PM
Thanks, Viv! You sponsor some awesome contests. People can't wait to enter them. I enjoy seeing your name in the sponsor section.
Date: 7/6/2018 4:50:00 AM
What an amazing and thought provoking story Curtis, so well written, good luck in contest. :))
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/6/2018 5:42:00 AM
I appreciate the comment, Roy. Sometimes, I wonder where these thoughts that I put on paper come from but I enjoy spinning yarns that bring a smile, a chuckle, or a 'wow, I didn't see that coming'! Thanks for your support.
Date: 7/3/2018 9:12:00 AM
Curtis.. enjoyed your write, especially your last few lines!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/3/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thanks, Lyric Man! Apparently, you got home safely. Praise the Lord! I suppose the suspense was building, and then the bomb dropped on that last stanza. I enjoy writing stuff like that and hope that others enjoy reading it as much as you did.
Date: 7/3/2018 1:14:00 AM
Great verse Curtis, loved the ending, shame for the cow though. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/3/2018 2:18:00 AM
Just goes to show what can happen when one strays. lol

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