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Midnight On the Clock

I was walking home through the park one night, and it was dark and foggy with very little light; I heard sighing I thought but I kept going, then noticed a man coming and I started slowing. He reached me quickly and we both stopped, I stared at his handsome face and then dropped; He picked me up and took me to the graveyard, to his home below the tombs with a door not barred. I could leave I suppose but was in a trance, he came to me and I took his hand to dance; He is very pale yet he has an ethereal charm, and as he kisses me- my body rings with alarm. I never make it home that night or again never, police search everywhere but I was not found ever; But, it is said that on the darkest nights a couple walk, hand in hand in the park at midnight on the clock ! _______________________ October 6, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/Midnight On The Clock Copyright Protected, ID 10-1395-619-06 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for Standard the contest, Something Spooky sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 10/24/2021 First Place

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Date: 4/6/2022 10:20:00 AM
Deserved 1st place
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Date: 4/7/2022 10:44:00 AM
Nora, thank you so much for the visit and compliment ~Constance
Date: 10/25/2021 11:30:00 AM
A chilling verse, Congrats on your win Constance
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Date: 10/25/2021 2:02:00 PM
Joseph, thanks so much for the comment and the congrats ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Date: 10/25/2021 11:29:00 AM
Constance, you did it again!! Outstanding write..I love it !!
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Date: 10/25/2021 2:02:00 PM
Evelyn, thanks for the comment and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/25/2021 12:09:00 AM
Wow! Very nooky! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/25/2021 8:45:00 AM
Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 4:15:00 PM
Such a unique twist to your spooky tale, Constance! Congrats on your first place win! :)
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Date: 10/25/2021 8:46:00 AM
Laura, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 2:01:00 PM
Constance, Congratulations on your first place win, I really enjoyed the spooky story and romantic twist at the end!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2021 2:19:00 PM
Tania, thanks for the inspiration and the contest and my great placement and the congratulations and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 1:34:00 PM
Wonderfully creative Constance! This could easily be a book or better yet a movie! Spirited congratulations!
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:20:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the great compliment and the congratulations, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 1:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:20:00 PM
Karen, thanks so much for the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 11:58:00 AM
very creepy indeed Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2021 1:05:00 PM
Han, thank you for the comment and congrats, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 11:02:00 AM
An eerie write, Constance, and a worthy winner. Terry
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Date: 10/24/2021 1:06:00 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 9:31:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. No more night walks in the park. Have a blessed autumn day...........................
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Date: 10/24/2021 1:07:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the compliment, congratulations and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win!! Very well done! I shall think twice before walking in the park- in the dark!
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Date: 10/24/2021 1:08:00 PM
Krish, thanks for the congrats and the compliment and comment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/24/2021 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance, very spooky and great ending. Best wishes Terry
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Date: 10/24/2021 1:10:00 PM
Terry, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/7/2021 6:18:00 PM
Excellent Constance! I love Halloween but I am not talented about writing about it. This should be a top winner. I loved the ending. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:23:00 AM
Connie, thank you for the compliment and the comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/7/2021 1:34:00 PM
wow, you wrote a GREAT one for the spooky contest. I really enjoyed this, Dear Heart.
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:24:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/7/2021 11:46:00 AM
"my body rings with alarm" is a winner!
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:25:00 AM
Rico, thanks for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/7/2021 8:03:00 AM
Spooky indeed, lock the doors, take the keys, ghosts at midnight need to be appeased.
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Date: 10/7/2021 8:27:00 AM
Dm, thanks for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/6/2021 4:31:00 PM
Walking home through the park in the dark, very spooky Constance. A well written thriller and a fascinating read… Belle
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Date: 10/6/2021 8:53:00 PM
Belle, thank you for the visit and the compliment on my poem ~ love and serenity _Constance

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