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Mid-Laughter and Lights

The lights blink like fireflies as laughter echoes the summer air, rides spun dizzying circles as I sniffed the scent of popcorn everywhere. Ticket stubs is sweaty palms, fingers laced with sugar thrill. Goldfish prize in plastic bag and stuffed bears won with lucky skill. Each booth--a doorway to memory, in twilight and at the break of dawn. The fun, joy, and the laughter that tangled and lingers within. Ferris wheel held secrets in it's own soft and thin. Cotton candy twilight melts and neon lights begin to shimmer across the sky. Music bustle throughout the stands. Neon pulses, laughter swirls in rhythm Strangers meet at the carnival. Night wraps us in its glowing pearls. Children screeched on spinning rides, hearts pounded from time to time. Teenage glances on a date-- blush, shared shy rhyme.as they walked by. The world is free to see the giant swing, as if leaning on the sky and touching the stars. For a moment, mid-laughter and lights, the night feels boundless, full of love!

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Date: 7/29/2025 2:36:00 AM
Very nice, Rowena. Your poem soothes the Soul and imparts a youthfulness which mingles happily in with all the obvious joyful excitment and innocent delight. Very uplifting! :) john p.s makes one feel young again!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/29/2025 4:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, John! I'm really glad it brought a sense of joy and youthfulness to your spirit. That means a lot to me. Wishing you many more moments that make you feel young again!
Date: 7/28/2025 8:47:00 PM
Those were some special days and nights in my childhood memories, Rowena. Thanks for bringing them back to me. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/29/2025 4:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Bill! I'm touched that it brought back those memories. Childhood has a magic of its own. Sending warm wishes from afar—your poet friend, Rowena
Date: 7/28/2025 4:41:00 PM
amid laughter and lights, we create delightful experiences and memories. Those moments are special, as if time stands still & you captured them beautifully. I agree with Gershon, a fave! hugs, Sara
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 4:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! Totally agree—those little moments really stick with us. Big hugs!
Date: 7/28/2025 3:50:00 PM
This is a fave for me, Rowena. Images of my past mingle with a mythical 'Gatsbyesque' atmosphere.... Except I don't want to pop the bubble that contains it all. Thanks, gw
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon! I love that Gatsbyesque vibe you picked up on—dreamlike, glowing, just out of reach. I'm honored it stirred memories for you. Let’s keep that bubble floating.
Date: 7/28/2025 11:59:00 AM
"The world is free to see the giant swing, as if leaning on the sky and touching the stars. For a moment, mid-laughter and lights, the night feels boundless, full of love!" -- Transcending. All of joy and love captured in a moment. The heart never entirely forgets. Lovely read. Thank you for sharing.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for that beautiful reflection! You said it perfectly—some moments really do transcend time, and the heart quietly holds onto them.
Date: 7/28/2025 11:40:00 AM
There is a melancholy feeling when just 'for a moment' I felt the pleasures; the winning treasures of a carnival, trinkets and such delights we'll always remember. The imagery really makes scenery come alive, Rowena! Enjoyed__Anaya
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya! I totally get what you mean—those fleeting moments of joy really do linger like little treasures. So glad the imagery spoke to you!
Date: 7/28/2025 9:39:00 AM
A brilliant write Rowena….love the imagery and where it took me! Lovely…Deb x
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb! I’m so glad it took you somewhere special—that means everything to me. Always grateful for your kind words and support.
Date: 7/28/2025 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful write, I enjoyed the read
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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