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Labyrinthine

Trapped in a sinuous labyrinth, I run down twisting corridors of well-trodden soil, flanked on each side by bushes twice my height! I go left; I go right; turning left again, I hit a wall. For hours I have been inside here running. Panic is swallowing my soul, for I am horribly horribly lost. Overcome by my anxiety, I let myself collapse to the dirt floor where I sit trying to compose myself, and as I sit, I struggle with the puzzle - how to escape this huge web with tentacles like those of of a giant green monster of the sea. How will I ever find my way out of this impossible maze? Afternoon’s glare barely reaches me where I sit in the gloom of my doom. Suddenly, the sound of happy voices! And not just within earshot. This sound is SO close that were I to just reach out through one of these large bushes, I am sure I could actually embrace the sweetness of the joy I hear. I have been left and right and all around. these long paths, and I refuse again to go down them. Grateful to be wearing my long pants and a long-sleeved shirt, I remove a polyester jacket which I have had wrapped around my waist. With the jacket, I cover as much of my body as I can, particularly my face and hands. The lovely garden which I had viewed from the road when I first came upon this miserable maze is right on the other side of the bush where I have ended up. I know it; I just know it . . . I take the plunge! June 27, 2020 for Dear Heart's 'Maze - 10 Word Challenge' Contest Submitted Sept. 14, 2021 for the ''L'' Contest New Or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/22/2021 9:34:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful and intriguing poem, excellent writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/21/2021 10:30:00 AM
Panic, confusion and fear perfectly described against the backdrop of a labyrinth Andrea. Wonderful metaphor for that experience of knowing where we want to go, hearing "happy voices," yet not being able to reach them. I really like the last "plunge" to reach your destination. Congrats and high fives. You made it out alive!
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:20:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my maze contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/1/2020 2:06:00 PM
This is such a creative write Andrea! Absolutely love the mystery and ride of emotions in your journey through the maze which ends up in a brave attempt of mystery. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/1/2020 12:03:00 AM
Nice story Andrea.. You kept the suspense till the end.. Great win.. Congrats..
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Date: 6/30/2020 9:29:00 PM
Looks like we both went with the 'lost' theme but yours was so much deeper than mine. Glad to read this tonight, it's a well thought out, pensive free verse. Congrats on your top win ~ John
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Date: 6/30/2020 11:39:00 AM
Lost in a maze with no way out but to plunge through, Congrats on your top win Andrea..
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Date: 6/27/2020 1:42:00 PM
I like your story Andrea--especially the ending to get to the other side.
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Date: 6/27/2020 4:16:00 PM
thanks, vijay, I detest mazes. I honestly did get stuck in one with my son when he was young child. It was horrifying and we had to wait and wait for other people's voices to follow them out!
Date: 6/27/2020 12:47:00 PM
hahahaha....great ending…."this...this must be the door......why!...it....it's....a.... good one" : ) stan sand
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Date: 6/27/2020 12:23:00 PM
Brilliant Andrea, those ten words are just staring at me at the moment. You've used them well, enjoyed your story. Enjoy your weekend and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 6/27/2020 12:04:00 PM
Your journey from anxiety to discovery is riveting, Andrea, love the line 'gloom of my doom' and the details of the long sleeved shirt and polyester jacket add gravitas to the piece, also.
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