Labyrinthine

Trapped in a sinuous labyrinth,
I run down twisting corridors of well-trodden soil,
flanked on each side 
by bushes twice my height!
I go left; I go right;
turning left again, I hit a wall.
For hours I have been inside here running.
Panic is swallowing my soul,
for I am horribly
horribly
lost.

Overcome by my anxiety,
I let myself collapse to the dirt floor
where I sit trying to compose myself,
and as I sit, 
I struggle with the puzzle -
how to escape this huge web
with tentacles like those of 
of a giant green monster of the sea.
How will I ever find my way
out of this impossible maze?
Afternoon’s glare barely reaches me where
I sit in the gloom of my doom.

Suddenly, the sound of happy voices!
And not just within earshot.
This sound is SO close that were I to just
reach out through one of these large bushes,
I am sure I could actually embrace
the sweetness of the joy I hear.

I have been left and right and all around.
these long paths, 
and I refuse again to go down them.
Grateful to be wearing my long pants 
and a long-sleeved shirt, 
I remove a polyester jacket 
which I have had wrapped around my waist.
With the jacket, I cover as much of my body as I can,
particularly my face and hands.

The lovely garden which I had viewed from the road
when I first came upon this miserable maze
is right on the other side of the bush
where I have ended up.
I know it; I just know it . . .

I take the plunge!

June 27, 2020
for Dear Heart's 'Maze - 10 Word Challenge' Contest 
Submitted Sept. 14, 2021 for  the ''L'' Contest New Or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful and intriguing poem, excellent writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Panic, confusion and fear perfectly described against the backdrop of a labyrinth Andrea. Wonderful metaphor for that experience of knowing where we want to go, hearing "happy voices," yet not being able to reach them. I really like the last "plunge" to reach your destination. Congrats and high fives. You made it out alive!
La France Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my maze contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me _Constance
Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 2:06 PM
This is such a creative write Andrea! Absolutely love the mystery and ride of emotions in your journey through the maze which ends up in a brave attempt of mystery. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings and love :)
Somadas Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 12:03 AM
Nice story Andrea.. You kept the suspense till the end.. Great win.. Congrats..
Watt Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 9:29 PM
Looks like we both went with the 'lost' theme but yours was so much deeper than mine. Glad to read this tonight, it's a well thought out, pensive free verse. Congrats on your top win ~ John
May Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Lost in a maze with no way out but to plunge through, Congrats on your top win Andrea..
Pandit Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 1:42 PM
I like your story Andrea--especially the ending to get to the other side.
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 4:16 PM
thanks, vijay, I detest mazes. I honestly did get stuck in one with my son when he was young child. It was horrifying and we had to wait and wait for other people's voices to follow them out!
Blown Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 12:47 PM
hahahaha....great ending…."this...this must be the door......why!...it....it's....a.... good one" : ) stan sand
Cunningham Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Brilliant Andrea, those ten words are just staring at me at the moment. You've used them well, enjoyed your story. Enjoy your weekend and good luck in the contest. Tom
Faulkner Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Your journey from anxiety to discovery is riveting, Andrea, love the line 'gloom of my doom' and the details of the long sleeved shirt and polyester jacket add gravitas to the piece, also.
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