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Maybe - POTD

Maybe I was too terse with my replies, But that was the way I was made. I have no fervour to apologise. Maybe I should have dated you so much more, Heck, could a leopard change its spots? I always was like that. Maybe I should have whispered sweet nothings, Like I love you dear, my sweet. But that was not actually me. Maybe I should have kissed you more, But mine were just mere pecks, Like hens kissing each other. Maybe I should phone you immediately But that would be surrendering to my faults. Yet I was not an arrogant man. Maybe that was her ringing my doorbell, I opened the door for her. Tears streaming down her cheeks. Maybe a moonlight shone from outside And blinded me, so I hugged her. Our kiss on the lips lasted so long. There is no maybe now or ever, for we Will plight our vows with love Forever.

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Date: 6/12/2024 6:38:00 AM
Victor, back when this was made POTD, Itrued to comment 3 times only to have them eate, then was ill a few weeks &so only now telling you how truly SUPERB i think this poem is! A Fav! One of your top best! Love it. Truly one to keep in my poem treasury
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Date: 5/31/2024 5:07:00 AM
Lovely poem Victor. We should take every chance with love so we never submit to love, only to forever. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 5/30/2024 8:49:00 AM
Dear Victor, your tender poem bares your heart and soul so beautifully. So emotive and evocative with a grand finale! Congratulations for moving poem being honored with POTD! Well-deserved my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/30/2024 9:56:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/29/2024 7:09:00 AM
My apologies for missing your POTD, Victor. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend! It is well deserved. Bill
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Date: 5/29/2024 5:57:00 AM
Oh Wow Victor how unbelievably beautiful, heart touching and emotional write “Maybe” is! So worthy of POTD…..Congratulations and a thousand cuddles!! Debx
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Date: 5/28/2024 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations Victor on your well deserved POTD!!!
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:42:00 PM
Dear Victor, Congratulations on your honour of POTD. Very touching, romantic, honest confession of love ...and then the beautiful positive ending "There is no maybe now or ever, for we Will plight our vows with love Forever."!
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Date: 5/27/2024 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 5/27/2024 2:19:00 PM
So many thoughts and tender moments to embrace, questions tumbling through space. Sounds like you were meant be. This is beautiful, emotional and romantic, all at the same time. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/27/2024 12:28:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Victor
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Date: 5/27/2024 9:25:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your POTD honors! Your integrity of character shines through!! Enjoy your day !!
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Date: 5/27/2024 8:20:00 AM
Awww so touching , Victor. Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/27/2024 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Victor Buhagiar! Romance is in your heart. "There is no maybe now or ever, for we Will plight our vows with love Forever" we can live by our uncertainties, we are who we are, but love will change us. Moonlight and love poems never out of date. ~Anaya
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Date: 5/27/2024 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! Your "Maybe" is a wonderful write. Love It... Have a blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 5/27/2024 7:48:00 AM
I liked this poem before, and like it more the second time around. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/27/2024 7:36:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your POTD. Way to go. Keep on writing. Let your talent shine. Sara K
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Date: 5/27/2024 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the honor of your POTD Victor! So sweet. hugs :)
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Date: 5/27/2024 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Victor! No one can resist the romance of a “ kiss on the lips lasted so long…” Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:58:00 AM
Hey Vic good to see you in the spotlight again with this poetic tale of forever love
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:47:00 AM
Looks like she broke you down eventually Victor, as indeed all good women do, not by nagging, but by sheer feminine sensuality, congratulations on yet another super POTD, cheers David
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:12:00 AM
Definitely deserving of POTD. Well done!
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations Victor on this POTD..I felt the ego surrender to the vulnerability of love in this penning..so well said..
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:04:00 AM
Victor, a wonderful poem, maybe's some times need to be challenged or ignored. Congratulations on POTD! - Hugs
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Date: 5/27/2024 4:16:00 AM
Beautiful reminiscing dear Victor, and so glad to see it ended well with you confirming your vows with love and forever. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, so happy for you my friend ..Hugs xx
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Date: 5/27/2024 4:00:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Victor. Enjoy your special day today.
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