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***** A Martian from planet Mars, He thought the earth was a star. Then sets down on the moon. explored until noon. These earthlings are bazaar. The Martian's name is Sir Peter. Earthling, take me to your leader. Earth? He points up, "See that light." This green man is not too bright. Helms a ship with an ohmmeter. The top leaders of the moon. Gathered in a soundproof room. Silly man an ohmmeter! We will install a GPS meter. "Mars" launch time is at mid-noon. Peter launched from "Moons" air base. left the moon for outer space. Captain's log entry reads: Electric tops warp speed. He's now head of "Aerospace." Written 2/26/2021 *Ohmmeter- an instrument measuring electric. verse 1- 7,7,6,6,7, verse 2- 8,8,7,7,8, verse 3- 7,7,7,7,7, verse 4- 7.7.6,6,7 Syllable Counter.net

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Date: 5/3/2022 3:15:00 PM
A fun read, indeed, Debra. Thanks for the Limerick about space. I enjoyed the read. Bill
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Date: 3/19/2022 3:10:00 PM
That is quite the tall tale indeed, Debra. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/11/2022 6:33:00 AM
Debra, I don't see my comment ... But on any day, I find talking Martians is de-stressfully great. ThanX & blessings in Jesus
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Date: 3/11/2022 4:59:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Anil, Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 3/2/2022 3:41:00 PM
Debra, proof that aliens go around in circles, the same as us, a lovely funny limerick story, enjoyed . . . : )
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/2/2022 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Indiana, I enjoyed your comment, happy you saw the humor. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 2/28/2022 11:40:00 PM
Woww what a brill fantastic poem, i love reading and writing about Martians and aliens. Kudos!! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
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Debra L Brown
Date: 3/1/2022 5:13:00 PM
Thank you S. I happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessing ~ Debra
Date: 2/28/2022 11:09:00 AM
Oh no! Has the Trump Administration landed on the moon? Aloha!
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Date: 2/28/2022 1:23:00 PM
Ha! Ha! Good one Rico. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 2/28/2022 5:46:00 AM
Hi Debra, I enjoyed reading your fun and engaging write from start to finish. It is a good entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Debra L Brown
Date: 2/28/2022 1:25:00 PM
Alexis, Happy you found the humor in the poem. Thanks for the comment. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 2/27/2022 10:49:00 PM
This is indeed an interesting tale Debra.... It is such fun hearing about aliens! You have done a great job ! Please modify the syllable count of verse one and four ! The instruction given is that it should be in conformity with the syllable count of a limerick....(As per my limited understanding)
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Debra L Brown
Date: 2/28/2022 3:06:00 AM
Valsa, Thanks for pointing out my mistakes as I'm still learning new forms. I'm happy you enjoyed the tale and it came off with humor. Hugs ~ Debra
Date: 2/27/2022 7:33:00 PM
Debra, your poem was great fun to read and I loved your images, such as, blue moon and green alien. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn :D
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Debra L Brown
Date: 2/28/2022 3:07:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn for your encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra
Date: 2/27/2022 7:19:00 PM
I enjoyed this clever piece Debra, got a chuckle our of it. Have a nice day Dear...
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Debra L Brown
Date: 2/28/2022 3:09:00 AM
Thanks Micheal, I'm happy your saw the humor. Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

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