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Marianne

Marianne laughs, she's happy sitting under the magnolia tree in Saint Anton's Garden alone, in Venus's bower waiting for no one in particular as the shadows of leaves dance across her face. Her lips break in a smile, Runs her hands through her locks, feels the velvety texture, smells the perfume of her hair. Hear dear Marianne's laughter, the happiness is always there, come sun or rain, spring or fall I marvel at her flair. A lark flies by, she sees it not, she knows its flight she laughs in happiness even though Marianne is blind. 10/11/2020

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Date: 6/5/2021 5:14:00 PM
Victor, A rare treat and trick of the heart this poem Marianne. -Richard
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Date: 1/6/2021 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I have known a couple of blind people. It is a different way of life for them. It is amazing what they can do. Enjoy your win and day with blessings..................
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:59:00 PM
I remember this one Victor, still a touching write, congrats on placing in my contest!
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Date: 10/27/2020 4:22:00 AM
A lovely piece Victor, so well penned with nice imagery. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 10/24/2020 3:30:00 PM
A wonderful poem perfectly written, Victor. Hope you're having a good weekend. :)
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Date: 10/16/2020 11:35:00 PM
Wow! She sure sees deeper things and is therefore content and happy:)
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Date: 10/16/2020 12:13:00 PM
Blind people are certainly aware of a lot more than us, one wrong step and they could be dead, so they are very precise! Awesome write Victor, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/15/2020 4:00:00 AM
She is so totally aware, she has a leg up on the rest of us, seeing more probably.
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Date: 10/13/2020 5:31:00 AM
A winner! Love it! The name alone sings with laughter.
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Date: 10/12/2020 11:35:00 PM
Wow, heart rendering poetry, love this Victor...
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Date: 10/12/2020 9:57:00 PM
It is so touching to read about Marianne's happiness and delight in nature. This is a fave for me. :)
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Date: 10/12/2020 9:57:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Victor. A fave for me. Marianne is beautiful in more ways than one. She "sees" so much beauty in her world. She feels the softness of the wind and hears the music of nature as it plays with her hair. She smells the sweetness of nature's perfumes as it wafts about her . No evil comes into her world. There is no ugliness. She has not let her blindness steal her happiness. Perhaps she sees more than we do. Well done as always Victor. God Bless and Happy Thanksgiving. JB
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Date: 10/12/2020 4:43:00 PM
This is such a great poem, Victor. I love the ending. Even though Marianne is blind, she is still able to enjoy the wonderful things that a lot of us take for granted. ~Angie
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Date: 10/12/2020 1:07:00 PM
this is so precious, Victor. I think I want to FAVE this one!!
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Date: 10/12/2020 11:24:00 AM
It always amazes me how blind people are able to find joy in life. They say the other senses are sharper. This is a lovely poem, Victor. I returned your Soup mail. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/12/2020 8:44:00 AM
This is touching, it is always beautiful when those facing adversity make the most of it and still smile and get on with their lives...
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Date: 10/12/2020 7:20:00 AM
We only cripple ourselves, bending to self-pity and victim mentality. So glad you've written a happy, spirited woman here. Beautifully done Victor. Linda
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Date: 10/12/2020 6:08:00 AM
You built her portrait in gifted brushstrokes--she leaves an impression on the reader in your talented write, Victor.
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Date: 10/12/2020 2:37:00 AM
- It's really amazing, Victor ... those who are blind perceive images using sound, they use the same part of the brain as us who see - (Blind hear what others see :) - A lovely poem :) - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/12/2020 1:19:00 AM
Such a touching piece Victor, I think she's is blessed with an amazing imagination and heightened senses and takes time to 'see' far more than the others who do have the gift of sight. Into my faves, is this a re post I have a feeling I've read this gem before:-)hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2020 12:56:00 AM
Your poetic words always take me on a journey dear Victor. I can see Marianne's sweet smile as I hear the laughter of this very special girl ~ utterly charming poetry ~ thank you... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 10/12/2020 12:12:00 AM
People who are blind are a great inspiration to us, they get on with their lives never complaining Tom
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Date: 10/11/2020 9:15:00 PM
The blind have specials senses that help the ones that are not there. Enjoyed reading and well done. Hugs Eve
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