Marianne

Marianne laughs, she's happy
sitting under the magnolia tree 
in Saint Anton's Garden
alone, in Venus's bower
waiting for no one in particular
as the shadows of leaves 
dance across her face.
Her lips break in a smile,
Runs her hands through her locks,
feels the velvety texture,
smells the perfume of her hair.

Hear dear Marianne's laughter, 
the happiness is always there, 
come sun or rain, spring or fall
I marvel at her flair.
A lark flies by, she sees it not,
she knows its flight
she laughs in happiness  
even though
Marianne is blind.


10/11/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Theraven Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 5:14 PM
Victor, A rare treat and trick of the heart this poem Marianne. -Richard
Goldsmith Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I have known a couple of blind people. It is a different way of life for them. It is amazing what they can do. Enjoy your win and day with blessings..................
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 6:59 PM
I remember this one Victor, still a touching write, congrats on placing in my contest!
Mcconnell Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 4:22 AM
A lovely piece Victor, so well penned with nice imagery. Take care, Gordon
Crabtree Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 3:30 PM
A wonderful poem perfectly written, Victor. Hope you're having a good weekend. :)
Daniel Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 11:35 PM
Wow! She sure sees deeper things and is therefore content and happy:)
Proxenos Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Blind people are certainly aware of a lot more than us, one wrong step and they could be dead, so they are very precise! Awesome write Victor, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 4:00 AM
She is so totally aware, she has a leg up on the rest of us, seeing more probably.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 5:31 AM
A winner! Love it! The name alone sings with laughter.
Horsman Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 11:35 PM
Wow, heart rendering poetry, love this Victor...
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 9:57 PM
It is so touching to read about Marianne's happiness and delight in nature. This is a fave for me. :)
Ball Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 9:57 PM
What a beautiful poem Victor. A fave for me. Marianne is beautiful in more ways than one. She "sees" so much beauty in her world. She feels the softness of the wind and hears the music of nature as it plays with her hair. She smells the sweetness of nature's perfumes as it wafts about her . No evil comes into her world. There is no ugliness. She has not let her blindness steal her happiness. Perhaps she sees more than we do. Well done as always Victor. God Bless and Happy Thanksgiving. JB
Crabtree Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 4:43 PM
This is such a great poem, Victor. I love the ending. Even though Marianne is blind, she is still able to enjoy the wonderful things that a lot of us take for granted. ~Angie
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 1:07 PM
this is so precious, Victor. I think I want to FAVE this one!!
Devonshire Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 11:24 AM
It always amazes me how blind people are able to find joy in life. They say the other senses are sharper. This is a lovely poem, Victor. I returned your Soup mail. Hugs, Carolyn
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 8:44 AM
This is touching, it is always beautiful when those facing adversity make the most of it and still smile and get on with their lives...
Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 7:20 AM
We only cripple ourselves, bending to self-pity and victim mentality. So glad you've written a happy, spirited woman here. Beautifully done Victor. Linda
Pandit Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 6:08 AM
You built her portrait in gifted brushstrokes--she leaves an impression on the reader in your talented write, Victor.
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 2:37 AM
- It's really amazing, Victor ... those who are blind perceive images using sound, they use the same part of the brain as us who see - (Blind hear what others see :) - A lovely poem :) - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 1:19 AM
Such a touching piece Victor, I think she's is blessed with an amazing imagination and heightened senses and takes time to 'see' far more than the others who do have the gift of sight. Into my faves, is this a re post I have a feeling I've read this gem before:-)hugs jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 12:56 AM
Your poetic words always take me on a journey dear Victor. I can see Marianne's sweet smile as I hear the laughter of this very special girl ~ utterly charming poetry ~ thank you... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 12:12 AM
People who are blind are a great inspiration to us, they get on with their lives never complaining Tom
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 9:15 PM
The blind have specials senses that help the ones that are not there. Enjoyed reading and well done. Hugs Eve
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