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THE MAN WHO KILLED THE WORLD It was there, then it was gone. A swirling mass of white and topaz rotating in an inky expanse gone. Vanished, right before my eyes. My home my family my country my planet no more. I say out loud to myself that it must be a dream, a hallucination. Three hundred twenty-three solitary days in space. Have I finally lost my mind? A ping. Faint but discernible. Like a magnet making contact with metal. I gaze through the porthole what is it? Tubular, possibly titanium. Only one way to find out. I don my spacesuit, attach the safety cord and venture into space. Once more I glance at where earth used to be. Nothing there but the cold blackness of I feel a tear trickle down my left cheek. Safely back inside the space station I remove my helmet to better examine the anomaly. A bottle of sorts? I remove the twist cap and find, to my utter surprise, a note. No, too long for a note, more like a letter. Or a manifesto! It reads: To the sole survivor of planet earth Greetings! As you read this I am already halfway home. Home? you ask. Well, that's a bit complicated. Suffice it to say I am not of your world, or shall I say, former world. We live just beyond your galaxy and exist in an alternate dimension. Like I said, complicated. I was sent to your world some five thousand years ago, from the time of your earliest written records. We became aware that sentient, intelligent life had at last come to exist on your planet. You then became of interest to us a fascination. However, it quickly became evident you were a species unworthy of continuation. You called yourselves the Human Race, yet you were hardly humane. You raped and plundered, thieved and cheated, conquered and destroyed. You were capable of such beautiful dreams, yet you indulged in horrific nightmares. You showed little regard for what you considered to be lesser life forms. Blind ones! They had so much to teach you. To our great consternation, some of these disappeared over the centuries. Your greed and lust resulted in their everlasting extinction. And now, your turn has come. Judgment has been pronounced. Oblivion is the sentence that was determined upon you. It causes us great pain to know that all life on earth will now cease to exist. It will be an issue for debate on my world for many years to come. A moral dilemma such as we have never known. For the past fifty years we have worked on a mathematical equation that would allow us to produce enough anti-matter in this dimension to annihilate your home world. No easy task, let me tell you. And no way to test, since the introduction of anti-matter into your space must ultimately result in immediate and complete annihilation. As you saw with your own eyes, the experiment was a success. Now you are wondering what about me? We will permit you to live out the remainder of your natural life aboard the space station. Artificial. Sterile. Cold. Your thoughts and memories will torment you as you contemplate a world you once knew, a people who once occupied space and existed in the time continuum. You are the last of your kind, a remnant from the past, all alone in the universe without hope. One last thing. On our world, in our dimension, we have peace. No one gets sick. No one dies. We understand The Creator of your world offered you this prospect, but you rejected it in order to pursue independence and freedom from the moral laws that govern life on all worlds, in every dimension. How sad. How terribly, terribly sad. Adieu MY GOD. WHAT HAVE WE DONE? what have they * For the manifesto contest 12/28/24

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Date: 4/4/2025 5:58:00 AM
What's missing? Those complicated words I find hard discribing that many poets attempt to use. Not that I dislike the words, but there are times when they are over used and cause confusion and boardame. I'll remember the simplicity.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/4/2025 6:01:00 AM
I tell everyone I'm just a simple storyteller. I avoid fancy words and impossible to understand poetry
Date: 2/24/2025 9:58:00 PM
You hit the nail right on the head, in most respects we're already dead. And we claim to be the most intelligent species on the planet. I can think of other words to describe what we are and it's not intelligent. I really dug this one Tom. Well deserved win my friend.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/25/2025 6:06:00 AM
Much thx
Date: 2/1/2025 7:38:00 AM
This hit me Dear, Tom. I hope we don't all get to pay for the rest of the sins. I hope we are saved. Forgiven. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2025 11:07:00 AM
Fiction but there are certain inevitable consequences for egregious behavior. Thx again
Date: 1/24/2025 10:46:00 AM
I'm proud to share the podium with you, Tom. Your poem is just magnificent. Congrats on your win, this is a fave for me
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/24/2025 11:31:00 AM
Much thx. I'll check yours out
Date: 1/23/2025 8:33:00 AM
I love your golden trophy win, You recently said we explore similar themes. This brings to mind my “People with Wings. Mankind longing for Utopia which is always out of reach. Well done. SuZ
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/23/2025 8:52:00 AM
Much thx for appreciating my apocalyptic story
Date: 1/17/2025 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Enjoy your win & weekend................
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/17/2025 12:50:00 PM
It's hard for me to get inspired but when I do the ink flows. Thx much
Date: 1/16/2025 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win!!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/16/2025 5:39:00 AM
Hey thx
Date: 1/15/2025 9:58:00 PM
Hello Tom, congratulations on your trophy win with this brilliantly written poem. Have an enjoyable day my friend
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/16/2025 5:39:00 AM
Thx much Zy
Date: 1/15/2025 4:29:00 AM
toast to your huge win with this valahalla kind of world where justice lives...amazing work, tom!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/15/2025 6:25:00 AM
Thx Nette
Date: 1/14/2025 10:22:00 AM
I had a feeling you might win a trophy with this one and money. Congratulations!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/14/2025 11:14:00 AM
Yessir and thx
Date: 1/12/2025 7:52:00 PM
I knew this was a top winner when I first read it. Heartiest congratulations on your trophy win, Tom:-)
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2025 5:53:00 AM
Muchos gracias
Date: 1/12/2025 1:23:00 PM
Congrats on your trophy winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/12/2025 2:01:00 PM
It's the least I can do
Date: 1/12/2025 11:50:00 AM
Congrats on the trophy win, Tom! What a sobering write. To think, perhaps there are some that live elsewhere with a peaceful, law-abiding life!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/12/2025 11:52:00 AM
I believe one day the universe will be filled with peaceful residents, after the issue of universal sovereignty is settled here
Date: 1/12/2025 11:04:00 AM
I can see why this one won a trophy... You are a great story teller..
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/12/2025 11:05:00 AM
Thx
Date: 1/10/2025 8:59:00 PM
Awesome creative piece Tom!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2025 5:54:00 AM
Much thx
Date: 1/9/2025 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on the trophy win!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/10/2025 5:49:00 AM
:)
Date: 1/9/2025 9:30:00 PM
Hi Tom, back to your beautiful prose poem to congratulate you on your well deserved trophy win.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/10/2025 5:49:00 AM
:)
Date: 1/9/2025 1:35:00 PM
Tom, I see you got a lot of favorable comments on this and I can see why. You weaved an interesting story together. The fact that life might not be restricted to our own planet creates some philosophical challenges for religious beliefs and our understanding of who we are. There is nothing wrong with thinking this way as it generates a lot of sorely needed humility. On another note, this gives you a chance to review a few of the major highlights of our tenure on this planet. Time will tell!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2025 1:38:00 PM
It's pure sci-fi but who knows? Maybe the aliens who did us in will feel remorse and use the survivor to start a new world elsewhere, albeit with some alien chick
Date: 1/8/2025 12:32:00 PM
Best piece of Philosophic Sci-Fi I've ever read! This leaves me stunned and wishing you might write a full-length book /movie version. I can see Tom Cruise peering through the porthole of your spaceship already. Bravo/Hats off to your Manifesto Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/8/2025 12:58:00 PM
Very kind Terrell. Check out Daniel Henry Rodgers when you get a chance. He's quite the poet/philosopher
Date: 1/8/2025 10:45:00 AM
Wow and yikes! This is a wonderfully written short story/poem. I see I'm not the only one who appreciated it! Congratulations! I just finished reading, " The German Midwife",a fictional story about a true event in history. During the holocaust of the 1940s in Germany, this midwife delivered the infants that resulted from rape or of the women who were expecting when they were taken to the death camps. It's horrific the suffering and inhumanity that occurred.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/9/2025 1:57:00 PM
An amazing and proud history <3
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/8/2025 11:22:00 AM
Always happy to see you at my door. Yes, the Holocaust museum has an entire section dedicated to JW's. What makes them unique is that they were persecuted not bc of ethnicity or subversive behavior, but simply bc they refused to support the Nazi state in any way. They were neutral
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/8/2025 10:46:00 AM
I learned something new however... among the persecuted Jews, Poles, and other s who rebeled or were thought undesirable, they also imprisoned Jehovah Witnesses. I'm sure you are aware of the history of those of your faith, but i had no idea! I respect those who stand up for what they believe. Your story reminded me of this and how corrupt and evil human beings can be. God help us. Xoxo
Date: 1/8/2025 6:10:00 AM
A powerful manifesto that deserves the trophy award, Tommy. The first people on Earth had it all, and yet they were not content. Even a 2nd chance is going to waste, and humanity must beware before it is too late. // paul
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/8/2025 6:13:00 AM
So true Paul. Thx for stopping by
Date: 1/7/2025 3:15:00 PM
Tom, How powerful, and how very, very sad. Everyone should read your manifesto and ponder its truth. As we watch, Earth cries for our help, and Democracy falters. Thank you for writing the truth! And congratulations on your excellent win!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2025 3:22:00 PM
Much thx for your support
Date: 1/7/2025 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your powerful write winning Tom!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2025 7:35:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 1/6/2025 1:11:00 PM
WOW! I am still contemplating your words. They are powerful and I feel God is about to execute your words. Sorry, I leave for a little while or longer and write, then I come back. Blessing to you.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2025 1:30:00 PM
We're glad you're with us. Pop in anytime
Date: 1/6/2025 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations! Very powerful write. Greed, power, arrogance ... absolutely destroying the world we live in ...
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2025 10:33:00 AM
Yes ma'am and thx much
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